Oops I forgot to reply it's a good story so far I hope you finish it
you know a lot of these stories don't get finished but I'm sure you can
Would one of the kitten Queens get kidnapped by macavity please I recommend Marie
How about a a scene for the kids too what happened on their first night of being in Paris
and why the the human owner took them to Paris do they have a play they're going to go to or a skit they're going to do
Of course there's going to be a lot of much between the three siblings
Personally I'd like to know more about the youngest cat that O'Malley had with duchess
Go have fun and explore your characters

Toulouse and my
We're not fighting of this mckavett toes or his cookies? what kind of cookies? XD