I understand perfectly. Sometimes we just want to side back and read instead of write and that's totally okay dude. Looking forward to an update.

Pls update sooner as soon!

I don't like beck I just have a feeling he is going to do something really dumb but I hope tori well stop it...by the way love this story keep up the good work.

Beck is a bit of a controlling jerk here. The question is, does he rape Jade, or does something stop him. It could even be his own motivation tovstop, but at the moment he comes across like he expects Jade to put out, and might force things.

Well Jade certainly is up to a promising start.

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So Beck is a cheater & a control freak. Nice combination... (rolling eyes) Jade does deserve better - especially this sweeter version of her.

I love this keep going

The thanks must make Tori feel all giddy inside, no?

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P.S

Why did u block me? I don't think I done anything to annoy u... Have I?

Like this one. And I'm glad the two of them are starting to get together already.

So far, I've only got one question. Why, if Robbie has his own car, did he need to get a ride home? I know, nit picking. Other then that, things seem to be moving forward. Tori has had a chance to show jade she's a friend, and this Jade seems to be a lot more balanced then the one from the show. It's beck who's all possessive and such. Did Robbie try out for the team? I guess we'll find out more in later chapters.

Keep writing.

The story's really interesting. I'll be watching for a new chapter.

Woa...awsm...hmm...mayb u shuld mk tori an hermaphrodit,u knw nd d guy in d relationship,dahs if dey eventually date eachoder...update soon...plz...

Cute new chapter. I hope the girls don't rush into anything rashly. Interesting take on Jade's persona too.

Love it soo much! Continue or I'll be the one crying! :P

Cool