What do you mean, whatever? Did you abandon this story...? I hope not because it’s literally killing me to know what happens next. I love your style of writing and all your fics are amazing. This is one of THE BEST SoKai fics ever, and it’s be a shame to end it there. Pretty please?

I love your story so much! Please update!

Okay, I know this will probably never be updated ever again, but if there is any hope that you—or even someone else as competent as you—could finish this, I’d be overjoyed. This is the very best SoKai fanfiction I have ever read in my life. I would love to see it updated again someday, but even if it never happens, you’ll always be one of my favourite authors. 3

shouldve stuck with the og plot dumb bitch u ruined the whole story fuck you

yikes

squeaky clean

crackerjack

When you notice that the second word from the prologue is Estheim, then you know that this story is going to be fantastic 0.0

dfjdfjifjksdjf OKAY IM CAUGHT UP NOW

Kairi how have you not had fried chicken before

Ugh I didn't mention it in my last review, but I had a bad feeling about Luxord...never trust British men who pick minors up on the street, man smh
Will Xigbar ever get his munny back? Who knows?

Okay, so I know I complained about the way traumatic emotions were portrayed earlier, but I REALLY liked the scene that played in Sora's head/heart/possibly arm! I could literally feel Sora's pain as his worst nightmare was being realized right in front of him, it really hit me right in the feels and added an extra layer of emotional depth to this story that I kind of felt was lacking a bit earlier on this fic. Really, great job, I clung on to every word of it!

FRIGGIN XEHANORT
Oooooh Vani's here though...I'm really interested in seeing what you're going to do with him! I mean, he's gonna wreak havoc probably, but I want to see HOW he's going to do that!

well at least he won't kill my OC

Okay you definitely can't kill Kairi, and I really hope you don't kill Aeris, so I wonder who's gonna come in and save them...so many possibilities...
#Rikuplz

I feel like everyone forgets Mickey, Donald, and Goofy and I'm just really excited that you have them in this fic. Their roles are small so far, but I'm sure they'll get bigger as the story progresses

I forgot how much I loved Barret omg. Also, I was looking for some inspiration for writing Cloud's character, and I definitely found some ;)

lmao vexen would order apple martinis

Another great chapter, bridging towards some real action! Can't wait to see what you have in store in the next!

Hm okay there's a lot I like about this chapter, but there are a couple of things that I'm a little iffy on, too...

You do brutal things to your characters, man, poor Claire T.T It was really effective in showing what a fucked up person Xehanort is, but at the same time, I felt like Claire's reactions to things weren't exactly believable, tbh. I feel like she'd be a lot more deranged, you know what I mean? Having to go through the trauma she's been through, she seems way too level-headed imo

I did like Sora and Amaya's scene a lot though! I really love their budding friendship - tbh, Sora and Amaya's relationship isn't one I've explored much at all yet in my writing, so seeing it here in your work is actually kind of refreshing :)

Pfft who needs RiMaya when you got TiMaya omg

YAS AVALANCHE

Are you JK Rowling because how many more characters are you going to kill OMG

Especially Hope, oh my goodness, that was ruthless T.T I can't even imagine what's going through poor Claire's head! And Kairi, ugh, when she finds out...

Also, that scene with Sora at the beginning was extremely powerful. It's been a while since I've read this fic, but I do remember what happened the last chapter, and his raw emotions only tugged at my heartstrings even harder

I have 3 more chapters to read, so I'll definitely leave a more in-depth review when I get to the end!

It's been a while since i last read a chapter for this story lmao. Good job on this chapter. Already anticipating the next. Have fun writing

I'm super happy to see you update this! I've been really liking this story so this just gets me so exited for the next chapter!

Well, this is going south fast. I'm kind of worried about the next chapter.

Also, "Whatever"?! What kind of after-chapter input is that?! Is Xehanort behind you or something?!