Insanely great story.
I liked how Nero is not only the bad guy, but can be a father, and help people, cry when he loose someone. He is as much of a victim of his craziness as the others. It's kind of sad.

You dared kill Jean x Marco!
But I loved their love story. It was sweet.

Love the end. It's absolute cuteness but stay realistic (it's snk...).

Good luck

That was perfection. It was definitely one of the most well written fics I have ever read, your writing style and character development took my breath away. FANTASTIC JOB!

That. Was. BEAUTIFUL.

Enough said. *thumbs up*

OMG yes you are that good of a writer! Thats such a sad and amazing story! :D loved it! Thought id tell you cause i know how much i like it when people say im good.. BUT DAM your way better :D YAY LEVI AND EREN!

a well rounded truly literary work of art! i loved every single word of it. awesome work, darling!

All I could think of during the fight scene was "I am Eren Jaeger, are you not entertained?!"

The fight scene was stupendous. so far, the story is wonderful. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story! It's such an interesting twist on the titans. You are making me extremely nervous because of that cliffhanger! Please update soon!

I love the pic. The armor is so stylish and his bright turquoise eye are just so entrancing. Did you draw it? :)

Nero is such a coward, taking advantage of Eren's and Levi's injuries to battle them.

I like this story. The Rome theme is certainly new unlike all those cheesy modern high school/college love stories.

I'm curious if Eren actually turns into a titan or not? I guess we'll just have to wait and see!

This story is so amazing... it is horrific in an educative way while also keeping to the fanfiction core of it. I cannot wait for more!

oh my god...i really cried in this chap! i can't wait the next one, update please!

Oh, by the way, have I already told you that despite the manny tears and rage fits this story has put me through I really enjoy reading this? It's gorgeously written, everyone is decently in character, nicely thought out, you did some impressive research and you fit the titan into the story and timeline quit wonderfully. Here, have some thumb ups and kudos!

(Quick note: Armin is my absolute favorite character)
*Jean challenges Armin to a battle to the death*
No...no...no...nonononononoNONONONONONONO*starts crying*NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO*fals down on the floor and rolls around*NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO*gross sobbing*NONONONONONONONONO PLEAS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *More gross sobbing and uncontrollable crying*...*continues reading one hour after she calmed down*

Appigrina was actually killed with poisoned mushrooms- Just a side-note, as well as Nero actually having been in sexual relationships with several male slaves. (Just had to do a report on the bastard for history.) If you changed this for the story, okay, I'm just saying!