please continue this. It's very good.

Hey. Please continue. This actually freaking interesting and a new kind of plot... I think. Brava to you, mate

Sounds cool to me. Waiting for an update.

Allow me to first congratulate you on a spectacular opening to what promises to be a thrilling story. It's only one chapter in, so I can't give an overly detailed answer on it yet, but suffice to say that you've done a great work at kicking it off.

I love the changes done to Raven, I'm interested in learning more about her relation with Trigon, I like the interaction between Raven and Jinx and I can't wait to read more of this in the future.

Well that's an interesting start. I wonder how different the world is and what could force Jinx to resort to summoning demons.

Looks like Jinx is in trouble! Can't wait to see more of this story!

This is great!

Hmmm... part of me is wondering if Trigorn might be slightly more fatherly in this story, though I doubt it. It would be interesting though. Regardless, can't wait for the next chapter,
thanks for writing,
gnurd