Reviews for Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Beyond these Endless Dreams
Happy1K1nob1 chapter 1 . 12/24/2014
This was really interesting, and I hope that you can put out a new chapter on this one sometime soon! :)
AFeralFurry chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
I think I'll submit one more OC. A little out of context for a Pokemon fic, but, eh, why not, right?

Real Name: Andrew Lafayette.

Mercenary Name: Shine.

Gender: Male, and he happens to be into women. Not out of dislike for homosexuality, but simply because that's just who he's interested in.

Age: 15.

Species: He's an Umbreon. This is more due to a mistake in timing while trying to evolve into an Espeon than wanting to be an Umbreon, but eh, he likes it anyway.

Appearance: He's about 5'10, has white skin, with spiky black hair, bright red eyes, and a rather thinner than may be healthy body.

Clothing: He's a little odd. He happens to run around wearing some strange outfit that happens to have standard leather boots, with white trousers, a yellow undershirt, along with grey leather bracers, and a black iron helmet with holes built for ears that happens to have a red Umbreon ring painted on the back of it. He looks like some wannabe knight, because, well, he is.

Possessions: He doesn't really own too much. All he has to his name is an iron sword he happened to find in a dungeon, along with a bronze shield he scavenged off of a foe and painted white. Other than that and his armor, he doesn't have two Poke (...Should I call them coins?) to rub together.

Notable Features: He wants to be a knight. As such, he goes out of his way to do the "honorable" thing even when it's downright suicidal. He also happens to believe that if someone needs help, than he should go rushing into a dungeon with no preparation whatsoever because he feels things need to be done as quickly as possible.

Personality: He's an honorable person, even when it's outright stated that his foes are not. He feels he is above cheap means of victory such as taking hostages and surprise attacks. If his allies resort to those means, he will deeply, deeply disapprove, and, if they go far enough, such as using a child as bait, he won't hesitate to start asking what the hell is wrong with them. He is, outside of battle, a polite, if overly formal person. However, when he gets excited, one can easily tell he's still young.

Relationship: Nothing at all. He's from a faraway land, and his parents... Are both dead...

Speech: He is rather quiet, with something of a quiet voice unless under stress. When stressed, his voice can clearly be heard to be somewhat deep for his age. "I suppose it is time to even the odds!" If he happens to show up in time to rescue someone. "Very well, I respectfully accept your offer." When told he can sleep somewhere for a night. "My Lord/Lady, what is it that is required of me?" When asking if someone of higher social standing needs assistance: "I humbly accept your gift." When offered some food for the night. "No. I outright refuse to work with such vile brigands as yourselves." When being asked to do something against his moral code. "I- I- Blast it... I- I cannot proceed... My apologies, but... I must retreat..." When defeated in battle and forced to retreat. "I am the Mercenary Shine. It is indeed my pleasure to meet you, my friend." When introduced to someone.

History: Not much to much to say. He comes from a distant land, and he lost his parents in something of a bandit raid. Shine almost died too, but, miraculously, an Espeon Knight saved his life by defeating them. Feeling intense gratitude, and respect, he opted to do his best to follow in that Knight's footsteps, even without the formal training necessary. So he wanders as a mercenary, trying to help people as best he can.

Occupation: Mercenary work. Fighting Ferals, saving children, even the occasional strange job like mail delivery.

Level: 34.

Moves: Dark Pulse, Moonlight, Cut, Protect, Psychic, and Flash. Psychic and Flash are more utility moves than anything.

Abilites: Synchronize.

Battle Style: Being something of a Knight, he uses his sword and shield as best as possible. Having studied swordplay as best he can, he can charge his sword with Dark Type energy using a Dark Pulse. When attacked, he does his best to guard himself with his shield, and if that doesn't work, uses Protect as needed. When he takes enough punishment, he's use Moonlight for a quick fix, though he'll still need medical attention later as he isn't quite used to using it yet. If he is much too injured, however, unless he is doing something such as rescuing a child, he will retreat if possible.

Likes: Training, difficult mercenary work, being a hero, exploring.

Dislikes: Those that resort to foul tactics, those that cause harm to others, killing anyone that isn't feral, feeling useless.

Fears: He's always afraid that someday, he won't be able to save someone. That he'll fail. And he just can't accept that not everything is his fault...

Secrets: Nothing much, minus a slight liking for gambling he has.

Notes: Not too much to say, really. He has the ability to channel Dark energy through his sword by using a Dark Pulse, and he can do something of a Moonlight Whirl using his sword to heal everyone a bit. Other than that, average Umbreon Gijinka.
Rainbow chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
I like where this is going so far. And Chenille is a badass weedle. Is it okay if I can enter some oc's?

Name: Belle
Gender: Female, Straight
Age: 23
Species: Furret
Appearance: Caramel skin color. Unnatural pink eyes. A height of 5'2. Light brown hair that reaches past her shoulders, a bang that is swept over her right eye. Small breast size, looks flat chested.
Clothing: A beige and brown striped turtleneck. A white skirt that reaches up to her thighs. Light brown stocking and white flats.
Possessions: Her weapons are two rifles. She's excellent with any types of guns. She can shoot accurately even if she's blindfolded.
Notable Features: Furret ears and tail.
Personality: Belle is very hyperactive and friendly. She's naive and gullible, can also be a bit ditsy. Yet she has her intelligent moments. She's very random and uses her randomness to confuse opponents. When she's working on a mission with her team, her sweet personality is changed to a serious one. She's easily captivated by shiny objects. When she's around Amethyst and Nikki she can be mischievous. She would usually grope Amethyst's chest, only to be knocked out or threatened with a scythe. Around Nikki she can be rambunctious and a trouble maker. She likes to be a heroine to others. She would rather give up her own life to save someone else's.
Relationship: She is considered to be a sister to Amethyst. She enjoys annoying Amethyst and likes to tease about Amethyst liking Nikki, although she is well behaved when she's with her. She is considered a best friend to Nikki, together they cause a lot of trouble only to be threatened by an angry Amethyst. Overall her relationship with Amethyst and Nikki are platonic.
Speech excerpts: When meeting someone new- "OH MY ARECUS HI! My name is Belle andithinkthatweshouldtotallybecomebff's!" When teasing Amethyst- "You liiiike Nikki. Nikki likes you back, c'mon, confess!" When someone she cares about is in danger- "I advise that you should leave my friends alone before I blow your head off. Got it? *giggles sweetly*" When confusing opponents- "OMA! Sprinkles taste like chainsaws but feels like kittens!"
History/ background: Belle comes from a hard working family, in a bad part of town. Where she grew up there was a lot of crime, she would want to help out the pokemon in trouble but her parents prevented her from doing so. She vowed that once she was 15 she would leave home to form a rescue team.
Occupation: She is the leader of the rescue team called Team Fate. However when she's not on a mission she is usually working at a café.
Level: 56
Moves: Sucker punch, Toxic, Blizzard, Hyper Beam, Flamethrower, Focus Blast, Shadow Ball, Rest.
Ability: Keen Eye
Battle Style: She's a far ranged fighter, she uses the element of surprise to her advantage. Usually popping up at different places to confuse opponents. If she's too close to an opponent she uses sucker punch and toxic to stun them in order to get away. She'll use blizzard to freeze multiple targets, Hyper Beam, Shadow Ball and Focus Blast is used to hit opponents looking for her. She uses Flamethrower to prevent enemies from running away. She uses rest when she is far away from a fight before jumping back in.

Name: Amethyst
Gender: Female, Lesbian
Age: 25
Species: Dragonair(shiny), does not evolve.
Appearance: Pale skin, Long pink hair tied into two ponytails. Strict red eyes. Height of 5'8. A large breast size.
Clothing: A pink kimono with a white sash, pink boots. A gold necklace.
Possessions: She carries a scythe with her.
Notable Features: The white wing-like appendages at her ponytails. A horn shaped crown. Her tail.
Personality: Amethyst is really uptight. She's very formal and proper. She is a tsundere around Belle and especially Nikki. She is calmer and more reserved than her two teammates. She is intelligent and likes to do things accurately. She is kind around other females and children, although she can be intimidating and harsh towards males. She has a terrible temper and can get angered quite easily, she threatens those who get her angry by using her scythe.
Relationship: She views Belle as an annoying little sister, although she cares for her. She is usually arguing with Nikki and views her more than a friend. She wishes to be in a relationship with Nikki, but has some trouble telling her. Overall she has a platonic friendship with Belle, while she has feelings for Nikki.
Speech excerpts: When introducing herself to another female- "It is an honor to meet you, you can call me Amethyst." When introducing herself to a male- "You must refer to me as Lady Amethyst, unless you want to be introduced personally to my scythe." When trying to confess her feelings to Nikki- "I-I see you more than a f-friend...D-DON'T get the wrong idea...dumbass..." When around children- "Aww you're all so precious little things!".
History/ background: Amethyst comes from a very wealthy family and was raised in a strict household. Amethyst was an only child so she was trained to be the perfect wife. While growing up her parents tried to make her see that male pokemon as dominant and successful. She grew to dislike male pokemon, and began to see females as superior.
Occupation: She is the second in command of team fate. When she is not on a mission she runs a daycare.
Level: 60
Moves: Dragon Dance, Flamethrower, Surf, Outrage, Extreme Speed, Draco Meteor, Thunder Wave, Attract, Iron Tail.
Ability: Shed Skin.
Battle Style: She's a balanced fighter. She'll usually paralyze opponents, before attacking them. She's skilled with her scythe and usually throws it as a boomerang to stop opponents. She hates the move attract but uses it to stop males easily. She'll use attacks like surf or draco meteor, if she's surrounded by a lot of opponents. Dragon Dance is used in desperate situations along with Outrage. If she's forced to use outrage, she will have to be knocked out in order to stop her outrage. Extreme Speed is a used to round up enemies.

Name: Nikki
Gender: Female, Bisexual
Age: 25
Species: Mawile, she can mega evolve.
Appearance: Tanned skin. Mischievous red eyes. A height of 4'8. Medium length dirty blonde hair, with black highlights. Medium breast size.
Clothing: A genie like outfit, a yellow crop top with a black vest. And long yellow pants. A pair of black flats.
Possessions: Bows and arrows, and a ax. A Mawilite ring.
Notable Features: The Mawile jaw, disguised as a ponytail.
Personality: Nikki can be pretty lazy but is a good friend. She is a joker and loves stealing stuff, however she has stopped the habit, most of the time. She loves eating, most of the times she carries food. She is very tomboyish and hates being seen as a damsel in distress. She uses her good looks to her advantage to get what she wants, much to the dismay of Amethyst. She loves drinking liquor, she doesn't get drunk until her 15th cup. She argues with Amethyst, most of the arguments being about her laziness or stupidity. She is often told by Amethyst that she is a bad role model for children and Belle. She likes Amethyst a lot and will hook up with her soon enough. She hates when people waste food, and will curse them out about how some people are not lucky to eat food.
Relationship: Belle is Nikki's best friend or partner in crime. Together they pull pranks and get into a lot of trouble, although they have to face an angered Amethyst. Nikki finds Amethyst to be cute, with her tsundere personality. She usually gets into arguments with Amethyst on purpose just because she finds her anger adorable. Overall she's platonic with Belle and in love with Amethyst.
Speech excerpts: When meeting someone new- She would run into the person, taking their money without them knowing, only to be scolded by Amethyst, "Sheesh Amy, can't you take a joke? Heh sorry for taking your money, it's a bad habit, names' Nikki." When being scolded by Amethyst because of using her looks to her advantage- "Oh c'mon, it would be selfish of me to not put these good looks to use." When she sees someone wasting food- "You should be ashamed! Some people can't eat the food we eat because they are dirt poor!"
History/ background: Nikki was an orphan who lived out on the streets, in order to survive she had to steal from others to get the basic necessities. She would have to dig through garbage cans to recieve food. She used her looks to live with several different families temporarily. She met Belle who promised she'll take care of her, if she formed a rescue team with her.
Occupation: She is the third member of team fate. When she is not on missions she either works as a nurse, or is taking part of battle competition's.
Level: 56
Moves: Play Rough, Iron Head, Sludge Bomb, Crunch, Flamethrower, Iron Defense, Magnet Rise, Protect, Attract.
Ability: Itimidate, when she mega evolves it is Huge Power.
Battle Style: She's a up close and personal fighter. She'll catch her opponents off gaurd with attract and that's when she'll go for the kill. She is great with a bow and arrow, she'll usually apply toxins to the arrow to be safe. She's better with her ax, she won't kill anyone unless she has to, so her ax is used to hold opponents still. She'll mega evolve when she's stuck in a bad situation or, just to be a showoff.
AFeralFurry chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
So, I see you have the form up.

*Shrug*

I'll submit an OC via review, but if you don't want to use review OCs, that's fine.

Anyhow, given most other people submit, well, sane OCs, I think I'll go for bizarre for one of them. I'll write more later, provided that's alright.

Birth name: Jack Flare.

Chosen Name: Taikou (I think it's the Japanese word for Pink. I dunno, I forgot).

Gender: Male. He's also very, very, very flamboyantly gay.

Age: 16.

Species: He's an Eevee, too. He wants to evolve into a Sylveon, though.

Appearance: He has really pale white skin, with really light blue eyes, pink-dyed hair that is pretty long, and he's about 5'3. He really goes out of his way to look as girly as possible. A little thin.

Clothing: Taikou is weird. He wears a white jacket, cyan pants, and, for some unholy reason, decided he wanted to wear a pink cape and a pink hood with holes cut for his ears, along with gold-colored boots. He is not the guy you want around while sneaking...

Possessions: In spite of his... Weirdness, even Taikou knows carrying a weapon is smart. He keeps a dagger and a strange flintlock-looking pistol that fires Normal type energy beams around. He intends to modify it to fire Fairy-type energy blasts if he evolves, though, and the shots are pretty weak individually. He carries around a diary. A few lockpicks, as well, a holdover from his... Less than proud days. He also keeps a gold necklace that belonged to his passed away mother around, to give any to the boy he loves, should he ever meet him...

Notable features: Taikou's... Weird. Really, really weird. He hops and skips around, doesn't feel embarrassed to kiss strangers in public, and he's really flirty with any cute boy he meets. He's also... Not all there, as when exploring, he has a habit of turning on his allies for "fun" unless it's really important. He's an ex-thief, as well, and seems to have eerily good luck, sometimes. Physically, he has a few burn marks from his abusive father hidden under his clothes...

Personality: Put simply, Taikou is completely bat****. He feels alone, therefore he goes out of his way to make friends. However, given his... Weirdness, he seems never to get the attention he wants. He's outgoing and loving, but he's afraid to get much too attached to someone due to their tendency to leave him all alone. He just wants to be loved, underneath the turning on his own allies, hopping down the street, flirting with everyone including married men, random dancing, and showing off. He's very polite, typically. He also tends to play hero if someone's in trouble, even if he wouldn't normally help that person.

Relationship: (Leaving blank.)

Speech: He has a rather high pitched girly-girl voice he typically uses in hopes of getting attention, but, when stressed out to his limit, he reverts back to his deeper standard male voice. "Oh, I'm Taikou, Happy meeting a nice little cutie like you!" When introduced to a male between 14-19. "Oh, hi, I'm Taikou. It's nice to be meeting you." When meeting anyone else. "Da Da Da Dum Da Dum Duh Dum!" Random recitation of the Final Fantasy Victory fanfare's first notes when he levels up. "He-he-hey, aren't we all f- friends here?" When dragged into a fight against a much stronger opponent. "...Please, leave me alone..." Whenever someone tells him that being gay is wrong. "Kuso, kuso, KUSO!" When in a really, really, really bad situation. "Drei, zwei, ein..." Counting down from three. In German. "He- Hey! That's... That's private!" If someone has his diary. "I HAVE NO FUCKING FATHER!" A very rare impolite moment, caused by asking about his father.

History: His mother, a Glaceon, died when he was 4, leaving him with an abusive father that didn't really care about him. When he hit about 10, he realized he liked boys, and received his first kiss at 11. Unluckily, his father, a Flareon, saw the kiss, and proceeded to spend the next few years trying to burn or beat the gay out of him. At age 13, he decided he had enough, and ran away from home, stealing whatever he had to to survive, until he got far enough away from his father. He doesn't like talking about when he had to steal to surivive, and feels guilty about it...

Occupation: Ex-thief, currently unemployed outside of oddjobs, as not very many places will hire an admitted ex-thief...

Level: 20. He was a thief, not a fighter.

Moves: Return, Shadow Ball, Swift, Toxic, Dig, and Attract. Most of these moves were learned either on accident or as a theft tool.

Abilities: Run Away, House Avoider, Trap Buster, and All Terrain Hiker.

Battle Style: Given his past as a thief, Taikou likes avoiding fights when possible. When impossible, however, he works on immobilizing opponents with Attract and Toxic before firing energy blasts from his strange, pseudo-magical pistol. When that fails, he does his best to use whatever move will keep him safe the longest, so he typically Digs. In a worst case scenario, he uses his dagger and hopes for the best...

Likes: Kissing boys, romance, maintaining his pistol, boys, staying safe, helping people, boys, random dancing, being a hero, boys, and did I mention boys?

Dislikes: His fatherr, homophobes, bullies, people that ruin others' lives, and people obsessed with money.

Fears: His father finding him, someone locking him up for being gay, losing someone that loves him to his father...

Secrets: That he's not really as happy as he looks all the time...

Notes: Due to his sexuality and appearance, Attract's effectiveness is reversed.
SHSL Slacker chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
""Climb on," Wait what?" - Might wanna change the comma to a period.

Hi hello this is me. Mm, this is looking good! (Never mind the fact I've read this a bunch of times already.) Oh, and look, a summary that kind of reminds me of MI! And yes, you can call me your friend. :D Team Friendship.
Well, that's a sweet title right there. Looking forward for more! ... Don't forget about WDC, now.
BlackGeneralNocturna chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Pretty Good this. Looks like Kane's gonna have a lot of problems with Aether XD
AFeralFurry chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
I don't presume you'll take guest OC submissions...?

Oh, well. I'll read this anyway. After all, this sense of humor is pretty funny to me, and I need a good laugh every so often.

Also, kuso, that was a lot of fuck.

...My jokes are boring.

Anyway, AFeralFurry out.