Wow...you're REALLY GOOD! PLEASE keep writing! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

I just wanted to say your a great writer and I'm actually crying over this so keep up writing! And I love he whole idea of the frank shooting!

Ooh this is getting super intense! I loved your description of Frank's descent into madness- it really helps me see his side of things as well as creating a unique reading experience. I can't wait to see what happened since you left it on a cliffy!

Hey! So I like where you're going but a few tips :)
1.) Name the characters. I couldn't really read this chapter because I was so confused as to what was going on. I had no idea who the characters were or what was going on, so please be more specific.
2.) Maybe switch to the 3rd person? Because in the last chapter you had the narrator as Jack, and this chapter is was someone else (who I think is Frank but I'm not sure). In a story there can really only be 1 nararrator unless you establish a switch of POV.

First let me say I'm sorry for reviewing so late. My phone was so jacked up I needed to get a new one and things are finally back to normal. Anyway- amazing chapter. And I think Kim's reaction was on point! I really can't wait to find out what Frank's plan actually is! Awesome job!

Darn you and your cliffy! Ahh wow, there was so much going on it was an awesome chapter. Jack and Kim are incredulously adorable! Jack is such a sweetheart. I love how real you made it, and I also love the way her parents showed up and that meaningful reuniting of the family! It was so sweet and adorable and I just died a little. And THE END! Wow! I cannot wait to see the reaction to what the reporters just told Kim! Yikes! Frank's out and he. Wants. Revenge! I'm very excited as this will bring on more stress but also more cute moments and angst and adorability! I'm so ready! Amazing chapter as always!

Another great chapter! I wonder how Donna's holding up? What's Frank doing right now? Kim and Julie's reunion broke my heart and stitched it up again! It was so dang sweet. Not to mention how adorable Milton is when it comes to Julie. I wonder if Kim's finally safe or if Frank is really out to make her suffer...boy this story is interesting! I'll be patiently waiting till next time!

That...that blew my mind at the end. I was completely convinced his cell mate had been in on the attack...but wow. Frank Bickle really has gone ballistic, insane, he's surpassed normal reason. Yikes! But wow did this chapter interest me and I really like that we got Frank's POV on the whole matter. Very good chapter and I cannot wait to see where you're taking the story. I feel like it's gonna get intense, and Kim isn't quite safe yet! Amazing job- update soon!

I really enjoyed this chapter since we got a new perspective, and we get a glimpse into how Donna is holding up. I like the closure she got from hearing from Jerry, and I also really enjoyed the adorable part where Jack tells Donna to be careful and Kim totally brushes him off like he didn't say anything- that was cute! Anywhoooooo that was a great chapter and I'm so glad you're updating regularly! Can't wait to find out how Jack and Kim's relationship will evolve after this incident!

Once again I freaked out when I saw you updated. Poor Kim! She shouldn't feel bad about this! She didn't do anything- it was Frank that went psycho! Awh the poor thing. Jack is such a sweetheart, helping calm her down and being so worried. Gah! As Milton would say. That was great and I cannot wait for your next chapter! Definitely one of my fave stories!

This...this chapter was absolutely beautiful! I'm pretty sure a sound that was definitely not human squeaked out of my vocal chords when I read the end- THIS IS THE MOMENT I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR! This is...ashsjdhjfj. Jack is so sweet, such a kind hearted boy, and I wonder how Kim will react to finding out she can't do gymnastics or Karate. Wow. You never fail to completely hold my attention. Every time you update I do a little happy dance. I am so excited for the adorablility and angst and emotions of the next chapter! As always update soon and fantastic chapter!

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This chapter wrecked me. Wow. It was so bittersweet to listen to Jerry talk again. And I'm...ahh...so so so glad Kim's gonna fight to live. I'm just dying in anticipation for her reunion with her friends and JACK! Ahh...man that love confession's really gonna work up my feels...UPDATE ASAP! Loved it!

Oh wow oh wow oh wow wow wow! This is one of the most intense stories I've read and it's full of adrenaline! Oh gosh I hope Kim's okay! I hope she'll make it! I swear if you kill her off I'm going to flip a lid...I'll be so freaking pissed... I'm so ready for that adorable moment when Jack and Kim finally get to talk again and he's all sweet and comforting- really looking forward to that. KICK HAKDBSKDN if kills me! I'm glad the other girls are doing well though. But I need to know what's going on with Kim! Please please please please update soon! I love this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter- I cant! Amazing chapter as always and fantastic ideas. Stay awesome, update soon!

Damn... that was dramatic and fun to read! Keep up the good writing!

Once again you made my day by updating. I have a crazy load of homework and that just got me so excited! And wow this was so sad but so intense, and I am incredibly nervous to see what's going on with Kim and I'm hoping for some adorable Kick moments! Wow. Poor Milton thrown into the middle of all this. I really want to know what's going through Kim's mind right now. This was an amazing chapter as Always, and as I always say- please please please update quickly! Haha I know these things take time though. You're an amazing writer and really capture the essence of the scene!