You should've left the chapter when Giovanni shot May...

So, will Pokemon Divinus have a Part 2? There's a note says its coming soon

That was a ride, good ending though but RIP Barry I guess. A grudge while alive probably wouldn't mean much with an eternity of either loneliness or Gary. 9/10, because I hate Drew and wouldn't have been sad if he had died.

A solid ending to a solid story. This was a very interesting and fun story to read, it was full of emotional drama mixed with the perfect amount of comedy. I also particularly liked how the finale wrapped up so many loose ends, yet left some things to the imagination. The happy ending that they received feels earned, a hallmark of truly good writing. Great job on this story, you managed to make another fanfic that I would consider 'One of the Greats.'

Soooo... Is there going to be a part 2? Because there are tons of other story elements to explore and unanswered questions to explain. But if not that's cool too. Cool story bro. I look forward to more. Peace.

Haxs still best character.

Also the ;) at the end seems like a hint, unless I'm just reading too much into it.

Either way, I'm so happy to see this finished. It's rare that larger stories on here end up actually being completed, and you did this one proud.

Congratulations on the achievement and good luck in the future!

How did Gary die? Also please do a sequel to bring back Barry. Also you said there's be pearlshipping. No offense is intended and I am sorry if I have been rude. I just hope a sequel occurs

Wow, just..wow. After 5 years this wonderful story is over, I am glad youre back and want to simply say one thing. Congratulations. You are one of if not the best author I've seen and you know exactly how to get your audience drawn in with a story. It's fun to have reread this during the wait to see how life experiences changes how I see certain scenes or simply just how different it's been growing as a person. This and brotherhood flat out are at the top of my favorite storys and I thank you for writing them. Congrats on finishing this.

P.S. If you ever do become an author tell me and I will buy every one if your books, you're that good.

This story was amazing. I think it was definitely worth the wait. It’s sad the story Is over, but the ending was great. I hope you keep writing amazing stories like this one!

About time you finished this. Honestly it was kind of rough around the edges but it's nice to see it come to a close.

I had to reread this whole thing because it's been so long but that only made me remember how much I loved it

I GUESSED IT RIGHT!
It was SARENA!
Now... To explain things,
As I thought, your Brotherhood was exceptionally good in terms of story and romance building and then after confession chapters were top-notch.
We all see that after Main Characters become couple, the base of the story, the excitement of the following events becomes more and more decreasing.
But Brotherhood was top-notch. Even after Ash and May became couple the story was pretty lively.
But,
,
Divinus wasn't as much as a successful Romance genred Fanfic till now. BUT in terms of Friendship, Humor/Comedy, Sci-fi Divinus is Rocking. Great Friendship, Sci-fi(Loved the invisibility ability but still hate the flying.
You could've added that Due to Super fast running and spectacular reflexes, They jump quite high and far. Not flying.)
well, I don't know why, BUT I REALLY LIKE IT when you 'use' the Character 'Mischievious'-Sarena-who-Ash-hates-a-lot even though I like her,( she pairs well with Red) and btw, also Haxs. Gotta give Credit to him.
But I LOVE HAXS in BROTHERHOOD.
His Slang Language and pranks and shut-offs were S-class. And he obliterated May, Delia and Nurse Joy.
Btw,
Since Advanceshipping is My first favourite, Pearlshipping my second. So I feel pity for Dawn

It seems I was right. The new ability is flying.
But to tell the truth. I loved all the other abilities but Flying is just too much. You've given way too much powers.
But Divinus is not bad. Rather it seems Awesome till now. It rivals with your Brotherhood. Lets see if Divinus is good enough to top out Brotherhood.
And is the New Girl, Leaf or Sarena or Misty.
I don't expect anyone but one of these three.

In the immortal words of Keanu Reeves, "You're Breathtaking!" This chapter was amazing and well worth the wait. Honestly, it's better to take the time to pick yourself up when life knocks you down than to just put out more content, so don't feel bad for the wait. After all this time, I'm just glad you're doing well again and are feeling up to updating again! And to be honest, I don't think I could enjoy reading your work as much if you were suffering through life without taking care of yourself just to appease us with more chapters. It really is good to have you back. Keep up the good work!

That chapter just made my day. Thank you for sticking to the story even after all that time.