Reviews for The Tale of the Orange Hokage
SakutoUzumaki10 chapter 6 . 7/24/2015
AWESOME...
Narusaku. ...
is My...
fav...Couple. ...
of lifetime. ..
And. ...ur story was...tooooooook awesomeness
can't wait for next chapter. ..
Guest chapter 6 . 5/21/2015
Pretty good. Going slightly fast but good. I like naruhina but narusaku just makes more sense. Plus sakura looks better and sctually has a personality. I daw naruhina coming from way back when he saw her nakef in the waterfall plus the fact japanese men like submissive woman generally. I think he put sakura in for the american audience so they would relate to her attitude more. Anyway keep it up!
SSG Gohan teen chapter 6 . 5/21/2015
Great chapter and cant wait for the next. Im also glad you didnt drag on them getting together.
https-tsukuyomi chapter 6 . 5/19/2015
Oohhh, there better be some lemons coming soon!
samuraipanda85 chapter 6 . 5/19/2015
Such a sweet chapter. Keep it up.
St3rfire- serafina chapter 6 . 5/19/2015
Good chapter aw finally a kiss. What next we will find out. In the next chapter.
Aqua Rules chapter 6 . 5/19/2015
Woo Hoo Naruto! Finally getting that kiss. I am sure he will need help along the way but he'll figure things out. I like stories where he has a genin team. I have a feeling that he would be a great sensei. :)
samuraipanda85 chapter 3 . 4/27/2015
So far the story is a basic premise but well executed.
St3rfire- serafina chapter 5 . 4/5/2015
Good story love it. Please continue.
shadowrgj chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
Hey Miller awesome chapter Naruto team actually does look like a mirror image of the old team 7 cant wait for the next chapter merry late Christmas and happy new year
uzuuchi007 chapter 4 . 12/19/2014
Nice
ShiaraRocker93 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
Plz continue this GORRAM AWESOME story. Team NaruSaku Forever!
Hanmac chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
Sakura with KageBushins? Oh so many possibilities ;D
my current idea would be that Sakura makes one Bushin that react like her Inner!Sakura ;P
(hm maybe that bushin becomes permanent and then Sakura does fight with Inner!Sakura who is getting Naruto)

hm currently imaging the scene where Naruto is pinned down in his bed by two (or more) Sakuras on his top *g

(hm i wonder how Inner!Sakura would like the Naruko form of him ;P )
Mangaka Shuzen chapter 2 . 8/19/2014
Sooo, I think you have a very nice idea here. I like your flow and I like the sequence of events. The only hong you could improve on is slowing down. Take a breath and allow things to go a little slower so the audience has a little more time to absorb what it is you're trying to tell them. Allow Sakura's feelings to spread to us, and allow her time to discover it. Other than that, everything's great! Love the humour and the fun! Hope to see some fun kids in Naruto's class.
Swarley Stinson chapter 2 . 8/19/2014
Nice story so far, I like the direction the story is going and hope to see more chapters soon!
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