Its been a while sincr this was updated. But the stories still gives me good memories and smiles .

I love how in every Lucina and Robin fic i read, Chroms always so goddamn oblivious to any show of affection.

Good to see a fix that started in 2014 and wasn’t abandoned. Looking forward to more!

This is a nice read!
I have a sujestion, you could write them having an argument as the resolve will be more heart felt and impactful. But its really up to you.
All in all I love reading what you produce and can't wait what comes next!

Wow! Love re-reading these and it's great to see you active again.
You're work is the best!

AHHH THIS IS SO CUUUTE!

And also, WELCOME BACK, FREN

glad this is back.

loved it should do a honeymoon scene

As a diehard Lucina x Robin shipper, I adore this story. And even beyond my own biases for fluffy Robin x Lucina fics, this one is pretty solid. On a technical level, I only really see one major problem. I didn't notice any major grammar or spelling mistakes, and I think you've got a good grasp of flow. There aren't really any sentences I'd classify as awkward, though I think part of that stems from your main problem: your sentence structure. You tend to use simple sentence structure a lot, and I understand it's to emphasize certain thought processes of the characters, or for dialogue, but I think it's a bit overused. It gets monotonous to read and is used in places it doesn't really have to be. You could really benefit from varying up your sentences and making it much more dynamic for someone to read. Aside from technical stuff, I think you do a fantastic job characterizing everyone, from Robin and Lucina to all the other Shepherds. No one seems particularly out of character and you write interaction between them all well. Sometimes it does get really sappy, but considering that's the point of the fic, I don't think it's a problem. Also, I really do like some of the storylines you've established for yourself within this particular canon, like the timeline of Robin and Lucina's romance and Chrom's attempts to come to terms with everything. It gives a nice sense of continuity and makes the various vignettes feel not quite as disconnected. I feel like what you're really missing is some of the more dramatic moments of the relationship. There's the obvious judgment scene, which I'm pretty sure your readers have been clamouring for for a long time, but there's also not many bits where Robin and Lucina fight, and never anything big. I'd like to see some of that, where they disagree but can overcome it for the sake of the relationship. I think the fic would be overall better if you include some moments where it's not all ok between the two. But still, I thoroughly enjoyed what I've read and look forward to more.

I really love this story.

Really enjoyable fun and light little series.

I think you should write a chapter where Lucina attempts to kill Robin.

I really loved your stories. You do an amazing job writing these characters!

Hope things are going well for you in life, and when you have time, I hope you can bring in another update!

I Love your work. :)
I do have a request if it's not too late: Can you make a chapter detailing Chrom and Sumia's reaction towards Morgan?

That and/or Lucina pointing out that to oblivious Robin that he has a stalker? (We all know who it is lol)

Awww, what a heart-wrenching chapter! You really got Robin's struggle through! Poor guy.