cool

very well done

very interesting beginning

xxx Kudos xxx : )

I have enjoyed reading your story the last few days very much, but I felt that had to say something about firearms
They do more than destroy. I respect your views but on this subject and will not try to change them, but know this
a firearm never hurt any without a person loading it.
firearms should be handled with care, people who do not respect this should be skinned alive and left out on a fire ant hill.

So, it's basically, "lol, you's been screwed all over and we're sending you back in time to fix it, but we're pulling all those cool plot de- khm, *restrictions* out of our collective celestial asses, so your job would be pointlessly even *more* difficult while Dumbles & co. still hold all the cards; by the way, we're not telling you everything, anyway, kthxbai." By the looks of it, methinks that Bobby ol' boy-o had it bad for our Harrykins. *Will* give it a chance, but I can't promise that I'll stick if the plot drags for too long without any significant changes.

Your story is awesome. There is great depth to the characters and story line. Looking forward to the follow up chapters, hopefully you have not abandoned this story.

I do like the story very much. I hope that your muse returns.

Mike

Whew. At least you ruined the story early on so readers haven't invested much.

i hope see you update this soon.. i know its been almost 6 months since you updated. i look forward to your next update... keep working at it its a great story and an amazing storyline unlike any ive ever read. keep up the great work as best you can .. and update as to how your doing would be nice. eather as an updated chapter 9 or a pm ...

A really long wait at that. I hope s true update comes soon.

Are you sure you don't mean sentient (one who has awareness) rather than sapient (wise).

Great story hope your muse comes back and u start writing again.

very good story hope to see a new chapter soon and hope that your muse comes back

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