| Reviews for The Nightmare Vacation |
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WhatsLoveWithoutTragedy chapter 2 . 10/1/2014 update this soon. |
TheFostersIsMyLifee chapter 2 . 8/27/2014 I love this story. I hope you update really soon. |
Missy78 chapter 2 . 8/24/2014 wow. this is really good. the caller was a really good movie. update soon |
Kaylina chapter 2 . 8/23/2014 Great job so far |
Kaylina chapter 2 . 8/23/2014 Great job so far |
AnnaM87 chapter 2 . 8/24/2014 Oh ohhh! I'm intrigued as to whats gonna happen next! Please update again soon, this is fab :) x |
Urbanfolkgirl chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 Okay, this story is really fun. You're doing a great job hitting a lot of standard horror tropes but making them feel fresh and giving this a really foreboding, creepy feel. I confess I'm hoping it doesn't get rapey, and that whatever you have planned is just old school stalker scary. It's also very visual, you're great at giving the characters body language and movement in the space so that the setting feels familiar and real. My only thought was that the creepy poem (which was a super fun concept) was just a smidge too long, and took me out of the story so I wonder if there's a way to say what you want about them being the next do die in less lines. Otherwise, fantastic job, and it's fun to see characters I love dropped into a really genre story. (sidenote, I've been debating whether to write them into an apocalypse type scenario, I love the annual apocalyptothon). Please do keep writing! (Also, I agree there are no great scary movies on Netflix!) |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 more soon please |
cheetahheaven chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 im scared |
SexiLexi1994 chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 i'm going to have to look into those movies now. that poem was so fuckin creepy love that every one is in character great job so far |
Hybrid769 chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 now i'm going to have nightmares thank you very much...jk...kinda |
Hybrid769 chapter 1 . 8/22/2014 wow. good start |
FreedomChick12 chapter 2 . 8/22/2014 I saw Dead Silence :O The twist at the end straight up jaw dropping great chapter though! the poem freaked me out a lot. which is the point but damnnn |
LS chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 post more soon |
WhatsLoveWithoutTragedy chapter 1 . 8/18/2014 this sounds super interesting, cant wait to read more :) |