Reviews for Of Merited Strength
MyDogIsMabel chapter 1 . 9/17/2018
Today is the 158th anniversary of the bloodiest day in American history: Antietam. I've actually been there and it's hard to believe that people fought there if it weren't for all the ditches...

Beautiful story by the way, I love hetalia fanfics based on real things that happen in this world.
Time Traverser chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
My God this is wonderful. And my god, you're still leagues better at writing fics with historical influence/themes than I will ever be.
guardianofdragonlore chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
History is a twisted awful thing...but it is so fascinating...
Lunar Iris chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
This is so amazing. So much detail. Such deep emotions. It got me right in the heart. I enjoyed reading this again.
silverheartlugia2000 chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Oh my feels! I saw this mentioned on kink meme tonight and got to the end and saw it was here on ff! Ah this made me cry so hard poor Alfie! And I totally support the scar around his middle theory! Csa ocs are bizare sometimes... They may have split up but the constitution prevented them from becoming a new nation(?) (I think.. Isn't the rest of the states supposed to unanimously agree that they can leave?) either way I bawled at this awesomeness of family love!
The Goliath Beetle chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Oh...oh my.
Firstly, let me say that I love FACE!Hurt/comfort fics and I was super excited when you mentioned you'd written one. And Alfred is such a sweetheart, and I adore his relationship with England. But this is just...wow. I don't have words.

I love how powerful this is. I can totally see Alfred reacting like this, and yeah, I agree with your headcanon completely. He wouldn't want his people killing himself, and he'd be very upset and he'd be in a lot of physical pain. I LOVE how detailed this fic is, it just pulls everything together. And that scene in the cemetery? That just killed me. I felt so, so, so bad for Alfred. And England, too. I love the idea of France keeping him from interfering in the Civil War, and how it's a test for his nationhood and all that.

And the ending? With that song...I'm going to go listen to it now. But damn, that was so beautiful. And I like how the fic sort of mentions what we've talked about. You told me about "Bleeding Kansas", and I loved how you brought that in here.

You are SO good at writing FACE fics. Seriously, man. I don't think anyone can write FACE better than you can. This is really, really good. I mean, I don't even know what to SAY.

"It's not the South! It's me! It's America too!"

I could literally hear the desperation in Alfred's voice. Broke my heart.

And, on a lighter note, your mention of India made me laugh :P Come on, England, how can you rule India for the better part of 200 years and not develop a taste for chai? *Shakes head in disappointment*. xD

Anyway, this is *superb*. And don't worry, you being sick had no effect on the fic. I think it's one of the best things you've ever written, honestly.
SiriusDancer chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
This was amazing! Thank you for this wonderful oneshot. I love England's understanding and care. Beautiful! Thanks
Wolfy46 chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
This was good, and it was interesting to learn a bit about American history.
I'm glad you made England and America brothers in this too, because there isn't enough of that around.