Urgh Dumbles is such a disgusting old coot. He should suck his lemon drops and die

It seems Harry has forgotten about Kitty. Hope to see more for this great story.

I like when Dumbledore is bad!

Hope Hermione and Tracey become friends with Harry once the stick up his bum gets removed.

Hi r u going to be updating this story

I can say whatever I want you asshole quitter who can't finish a story

This got me thinking: fountain pens? Flipping fountain pens? No one uses those these days—nor in the time of Tony Stark—not even during the time of Howard Stark. Fountain Pens?

Please, for God’s sake—stop using “giving off a powerful aura,” it’s getting overused and cringey. He’s an eleven year old boy. His presence in any establishment would be nothing but unless some wizard has a BS and made up “magic and aura sense.”

Unless Harry was raised as a Brit, I doubt he’d be using their argot—slang, I mean. “Wanker” isn’t something we use aplenty in the US.

Okay. There is no way in hell that a modern American like Tony Stark—much less a modern-American-raised Harry Potter—would speak like that. Our speech is *literally* the most casual speech on the planet. You don’t get anymore casual than American English. I won’t call your story trash, ‘cause it’s good so far, but I’d like to point out that you need some refreshing vocabulary in there. Get a beta/co-author to help you out and look at what can be replaced or improved. I feel like I’m reading the work of beginner middle school student—no offense, but it’s my observation, my dude.

I have really enjoyed your story. I hope you will finish it some time. It is a great concept. I hope you don’t stop. Thank you very much
Frank

Damn, I lost count but most of your fan fic novels, that last more then 20 chapters are amazing. It's sad that they were discontinued, but there isn't much to do if the story is already set in stone, and a Fan author is just writing their version. Great job though.

About damn time you started showing the "smooth talking" aspect of your Harry Potter (Stark). He is aware that if they expel him, his wand will be snapped and his magic will be voided.

I don't know where you got this idea for your Harry Potter but to be honest Pepper would be mortified (if you are actually trying to follow their characters as Stan Lee designed them). Your HP is way over the top in the disrespectful attitude. I am sure as smart as Tony is he would have had Harry blend in until he could drop out of the school and keep his magic.

okay, you started the story off okay but now you are doing something way off character for even Tony Stark. Assuming for a second that Harry was raised to be like Tony, even as arrogant as Tony has been in every movie (and definitely the CBs) he never actually disrespected anyone. Especially since his company has to operate internationally. This attitude of Harry's could hurt Tony's business in other countries, especially the European countries.