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I just love this fanfict. There just isn't enough of this kind of nalu fictions.

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wow...just wow. why couldn't that be me T_T

I love it and I wonder if Lucy would be pregnant because Natsu's cock ring slipped? And please make another chapter foursome Lucy is the only girl...

Oh MY GOD! XD XD XD BEST SMUT I'VE EVER READ! YOU SHOULD DO MORE! OR... OR A THREESOME! ALTHOUGH I ONLY READ LUCY FANFICS... OR A FOURSOME WITH LUCY AS THE ONLY GIRL! XD DO YOU TAKE REQUESTS? CUZ I CAN DEFINITELY BE THE FIRST TO HAVE ONE! JUST... WELL P.M'PRINCEZZ ZIA' IF YOU DO! She knows what to do!
Looking forward for your lemons,
No one...

How did Natsu get out of his restraints? Also you also might wanna label the flashback because it was a little confusing at first... great story! : )

Where did the handcuffs go all of a sudden? O.o I don't wanna sound mean or anything, but I was quite confused throughout the story. It didn't seem to be one coherent telling of a story, more like several individual parts of different stories mixed together in one... The individual parts alone were quite good though...

well i have no words to say i never knew Lucy had such a um... playful mind and Natsu had no control...;)