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FrankieHS chapter 40 . 2/1/2017
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Vana Valie chapter 26 . 12/6/2016
now I finished chapter 26.
I really wish, I had more time for reading at the moment, but believe me, if I say, that every possible free minute, I catch my phone and read another chapter! this is like a roller coaster! my feelings go up and down! wow! this is because of your writting skills! I actually feel, what your characters feel...and I suffer, too... but there were some really nice passages with lots of nice comfort. ohhh, I adore the part with bones embracing Jim the whole night, with spock assisting him by his side. oh my gosh. great! this is one of the most complex and best stories on fanfic, for me...
as you also said, it's in some points not canon, but I really appreciate the slight differences, especially with spock! Greetings, your big fan lara from Germany
Vana Valie chapter 9 . 12/2/2016
i just finished chapter 9. WHAT! no! I'm nearly crying. Bones and Jim...those friendship is everything, the whole star trek universe is relying on! (for me...)
and you destroy it worth this one finishing sentence...
my stomache is cramping...hooooly sh#t...! damit! ...
Vana Valie chapter 9 . 12/2/2016
i just finished chapter 9. WHAT! no! I'm nearly crying. Bones and Jim...those friendship is everything, the whole star trek universe is relying on! (for me...)
and you destroy it worth this one finishing sentence...
my stomache is cramping...hooooly sh#t...! damit! ...
anastasiaeliades27 chapter 40 . 7/30/2016
the apple part got me
cr8zgirl chapter 45 . 7/27/2016
Wow I just finished this story & it blew me away. Thanks for writing.
Genibane chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
An incredibly intense and emotional story. I was rather confused in the beginning but this smoothed out as I kept reading.
tanseynz chapter 43 . 7/17/2015
A seriously complex and disturbing story, with your canon characters developing in ways I'm sure the originators never dreamed of, and your own characters adding real strength to an already powerful plot.
Despite a few plot holes and grammatical snafus (can't imagine Spock ever saying 'off of' given he speaks Standard, not colloquial American English) the strength of this story is undeniable and the appeal evident.
tanseynz chapter 40 . 7/17/2015
Omg, that was so intense! I really get Bones's grief, and as for bloody Winona...a quick trip out an airlock would be too good for her!
tanseynz chapter 33 . 7/17/2015
I'm enjoying this a lot, and just have one point about something in this chapter. Elise said she looked forward to meeting the 'infamous' captain who saved her granddaughter. Infamous has negative connotations, which I doubt was what you intended. Illustrious or distinguished might fit better.
Guest chapter 43 . 7/10/2015
Loved all of it! The cliffhangers, the humor, the h/comfort factor, storyline and relationships.. amazing work thanks! :-)
Tait chapter 43 . 7/3/2015
Fantastic, kept me reading for three days, couldn't stop. Well done, I can not wait for the sequel.
HappytheExceed chapter 43 . 6/28/2015
Gosh. You are really talented of course complemented with a talented beta. I can't describe how I feel with my limited dictionary. Congratulations in completing another story. Can't believe I have followed this far too. Speaking of Red Tail, it just rang a bell. I thought I saw it somewhere. I got a feeling the next one will be more exciting.
Elanor2000 chapter 43 . 6/24/2015
That was so awesome. Look forward to the sequel
Beverley Sharp chapter 43 . 6/24/2015
I never want this story to end. I do hope you will continue writing
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