I think I would have done another chapter, an IF case, in which they wouldnt have ended up together once again. Yes, its fiction. Yes, its supposed to end on a happy note (which I consider bs). Not every story need to end with a happy ending. Because otherwise its not realistic. Life is not about only happy endings. It has bad endings too. And some stories of yours might have made me end up with some doubts about the way Ive been doing things...
Also, now 2 of your stories seem to have a rushed and incomplete ending... Im so gonna keep to myself my own words! Read ya later!

I am living your stories dude like I’m binging them rn!

i like it. natsume,he thinks to much.

I love you and all your philosophic writing that I can't help but read the last chapter so many times. So much depth in a simple, short story and I became a fan. I felt the same reading this story and reading Coelho's Veronika Decides to Die. More power to you and your writing!

Wow ! Mikan is very brave and self-denying... I wouldn't have the patience haha ! He never tells what he feels for her before being cornered... But i liked the fanfic and your writing ! And I find it realistic :)

i just realized that all your stories were my favorites but i don't know that you wrote them all. keep up the good writing

Your decision that Natsume and Luna shouldn't have sex is just fitting in this story. I guess they're just so broken, and they know that having sex with each other would only hurt them more. I can really feel Luna and Natsume's anguish in my bones. Good job writing them!

Well, okay, a lot of the theology stuff about existentialism and whatnot kind of went in over my head - but I did like this story, nevertheless. It's nice to see Natsume portrayed as a real, flawed human being for once, and I like how Mikan actually stands up against his neglect. I'll definitely be keeping an eye on your fics (:

wow... this story is so deep and I don't know it's amazing. The love they felt, their perspectives about life. The way you wrote this story is perfect. I really loved reading it! :)

Thank you so much for not making them have sex...I don't think I could have read this anymore if he did...*he wouldn't have any more hope of getting together with that mistake. scary thought!*

This was written very beautifully! :')

Yeeeeey
glad it end up that way

Hoho! I see what you did there! :D I'm glad you found the quote I gave you useful. Anyway, this is complete now, right? Glad it was a happy ending. :")

Can't say anything anymore. Haha!
–MitsukaiYuki

YAAAY THANK YOU FOR PUTTING THEM TOGETHER IN THE END!

PLEASE DO AN EPILOGUE...Their break up taught them a lot..at least their talks went well and finally give each other a chance to work out their relationship again..