I know you wrote the awhile back but I’ve just now been introduced to your work. I’m glad I gave it a perusal. Loving this story!

I'm loving these characters. The banter has been hilarious in this chapter! Thanks as always!

Would I be wrong to assume Tanya is a total coo coo. Like plum loco? Seems like Bella is always thinking. And seems Edward is really impressed with that and how intelligent she is. I look forward to reading more. Thanks again.

This chapter sure escalated quickly! I like that Bella stood up for herself. I hope there is more on Tanya soon. Thanks for writing and sharing your work.

Did not see that coming. Loving this story.

I'm thinking Jacob is a dirty dog. I'm thinking Bella and Edward will both know soon too. Guess I'll find out if I'm wrong! Thanks again!

Haha! Funny! Glad they finally made love...hope they do more of that!

One step forward, 4 steps back. No breaks so far for Edward, or for Bella for that matter. Looking forward to continuing. Thanks again.

You've made the carnival sound really awesome. I guess after this glimpse into Edward that a little pr may be a good thing? And it seems both Edward and Bella suffer panic attacks though Bella seems to have a handle on hers somewhat. Not a good first meeting for them. Thanks for writing and sharing your work.

I'm really liking this! Love your Aussie talk, too!

This Bella is in a situation many face as well. Not being happy where she is. Just doing what she's doing without thought to personal happiness. Enjoying this so far. Thanks for writing and sharing your work.

I think there are more people that feel like this Edward does than one might expect. Lonely and bored when surrounded by people, I mean. Thanks for writing and sharing your words.

GREAT STORY

Thank You, Thank You! What a wonderful story I wish it would never end:(

What a great story, I’m surprised I have not seen it before. You are talented