This is so adorable, I could squeal! So cute! And Yami being wise and not simply telling Yugi that he's not afraid. He counselled him and let him see that it wasn't the dark Yugi's afraid of. So well done. You write beautifully!

Wow, I really liked this story! Your portrayal of the character was awesome and I really like your message. I didn't find it cliche at all. Great job! ;)

I'm in high school right now and I still have a fear of the dark but I'm not afraid to admit that. Fear IS natural after all.

I like it. It's cute and there's very powerful wisdom when yami speaks

It's really nice, especially how you incorporated the title into the story as the last line. I like the message behind this - how Yugi is actually afraid of the things lurking in the dark and not the dark itself, and how darkness can be wonderful too, because without it, there would be no stars. Anyway, it was a good read :)

I enjoyed the interaction between them in this. I like Yami's speech at the end. My only problem with this is that I personally do not imagine Yugi being afraid of the dark when he's older, but that's just my take on it.