Sounds like a typical Harry Potter brand of self-deprecating angst with a healthy side dish of the same coming from Hermione. I'm mighty surprised that he said anything at all.

And yes, talk about incomplete. Even omakes had to reach some conclusion/resolution, usually humorous or satirical one.

excellent I wish their was more to it

It's a great story although I wish there was more.

I feel that there should be a little more. Not sure what exactly but just a little bit more. Oh by the way this little one shot is great and I do agree that this is what should have happened not what originally did in cannon.

While it is not bad, I just don't see romance in this.

I think you should write a romance sequel with Harry and Hermione.