Good story it’s really a fun read, I think the summary is somewhat unnecessary but eh. Keep up the good work

I want an angel Asia

Hmm. I was right. Neat.

Oh, the glorious burns!

Ah, the terror of being chased by lamias. And a fine foxgirl.

The power is neat and has oh so much potential, and I love what you've done with Raynare. What Dohnaseek was doing opens up dangerous doors too though, like other beings doing just the same, and heavily as it is looked down on. Also, wholesome wing hug!

Very clearly a sea serpent of some some sort, I'm thinking one from Norse mythology, that sounds about right.

Mm, I like the way you wrote Raynare.

Sorry dude but this story is kinda lame

Cuando hablaste del Arzobispo, no iba Arzobispo si no que Archiduque y se refiere al patriarca del clan Agares, que es el que se ocupa de la comunicación entre la nobleza y los líderes del inframundo
Y esta es una pequeña corrección el poder de la destrucción del clan Bael, destruye todo incluso el alma de sus víctimas
Son pequeñas correcciones que mejoran aunque no se noten.
Saludos y me gusta la historia la terminare de leer para dar una opinión completa pero me gusta por donde va encaminado el fanfic

did this dude legit fall in love with a girl he met hours ago? That's child-like naivety and stupidity right there, childlike because no teen or adult in their right mind would actually fall in love with someone at a glance. Be lustful for their body yes, maybe even like them from their brief encounters, but not LOVE...

Kind of figured he’d be a bit more... powerful right put the gate than he is I assume he will get stronger as they all do but it just feels weird, in most si or transmigration fics where the oc or si has foreknowledge they prep for the cannon events better

Gotta review about this, I like how you set the details up (not like other authors) and the flow of the story is actually pretty good hopefully I get to see the end of this story. cheerio~~!

ehh I like your story but also at the same time also find it annoying when main characters tell others their true origin, at least so quickly