Actually one of the worst things I've ever read... A waste of time. Start with something more your level and don't just add more garbage into the fandom.

I new chapter and continuation would be nice. Things were going great so just keep doing that.

Looks like a good plot, but with it being 2 years since the publish date and only 12k words I am not even going to bother reading any further, despite how enjoyable the first chapter was.

Make this a maledom

Not was I hopeing for

More chapters!

Great chapter.

Yo you guys, sorry I haven't been active for a while, anyways thanks for giving me reviews, follows and favorites, I appreciate it, and I will make more chapters, I haven't given up on it, but academic work has been tricky these days as well as exams, so I promise I will write out more chapters once a month if given the time, and also I will start making crossovers between another anime and a video game later on 2015, probably summer, because, I have been thinking over so many ideas that I could have for these fan fic's, the main character relations and what not. So please PM if you need to tell me anything, and also I made one mistake, when I put Hizashi, I had thought it was him who was alive not Hiashi, I didn't get to see much of Naruto, so I thought Hizashi was caring for Hinata, now never mind that just know that I meant Hiashi.

i love this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic.

More ch plz

I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters.

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Can someone give a little explanation please. Like what is going on, is this a AU or how old are they?

Terrible

Love it! Your really creative for your age. Keep up the good work.