I know you did a prequel to this showing how Luke was recruited, but have you ever considered doing a sequel to this, showing how things would end if Luke were an Imperial spy?

God!I must write a one-page review for your epic writing and share it on the next lecture recommend exchange in my class(put a heart. jpg here). Great job! I am crying now

Wow
Been a long time since I'd read this and I'd forgotten your dark twist. Awesome

Crocodile tears

Good God, I was not expecting that twist. This so well written, and everything hidden to perfection. Amazing.

This did a 180 twice and just WOW

Man that was intense. It was action packed all the way through and I honestly could not predict the ending. Well done!

Riveting and turning scary after the surprising twist. Very well written!

This is fantastic

... so not expecting that turnabout... wow... just wow.

This was an amazingly powerful story. The clinical tone of the wording just added to the suspense, and the twist you gave in part two was astounding. The research you did in preparing this tale was well used, and added to the realism of the events. The ambiguity of the ending has my mind spinning as to just whose side Luke is on: Rebel, Imperial, or his own. I'm very impressed!

Holy crap, this is fantastic. Normally I hate not knowing exactly what's happening in a story, but the ambiguity of Luke's character and all the layers to him was far more enjoyable than frustrating in this scenario, and considering the circumstances, I really enjoy that not everything was as it seemed...maybe more than once.

Hello, I was wondering If I could do a voice over of this for a personal project. I am new to voice overs and want to practice with various star wars stories. Before I post anything anywhere I will send you an MP3 of the the first few paragraphs if you like.

Why must this end in such an enigmatic way?! Still, this was tremendous. :)

Whhhhaaaat. This has been enlightening. :) I'm off to read part two!