| Reviews for Dai Li's Account: Code Blue |
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shiroiokami1732 chapter 4 . 6/12 he has mastered the way of the blue spirit |
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 4/24 *Best Thor voice*Another! XD Anyway, poor misunderstood Zuko. It was a gift! Not a threat! LOLz, even when he's learned to use his indoor voice and negotiates with the best of them, people are still so judge-y. Also, why are the townspeople afraid of him? He's a good boi vigilante wasn't he? Robin Hood but with a mask and likes sharp pointy things instead of just pointy things. |
Briar Ruler chapter 3 . 10/30/2019 (Laughs) I really enjoyed this. I mean it’s hilarious but you also have a really good point: The Blue Spirit is terrifyingly, Fire Lord Zuko is terrifying, so the fact that they are the same person is exponentially more terrifying and enough for any sane person to never ever want their anger directed towards oneself. I like Agent Fang and Trainee Raven. It is mean of me but I am highly amused by how frightened the Dai Li are of the Blue Spirit. The way you used different POVs, the two Dai Li’s and Zuko’s, was good. There are a few spelling mistakes I’ve noticed but they didn’t disrupt the flow of the story and your writing is generally good. From my own experience I’d guess that if you re-read the story carefully a week or so after first posting it then you’d notice the very minor mistakes that snuck through your earlier editing. Thanks for writing and posting this story. It was interesting, amusing and occasionally made me pause to consider things. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/4/2019 I love it! |
snow-bun-buns1598 chapter 3 . 10/10/2018 Great! I enjoyed reading this! Hahahaha, Zuko makes all of them paranoid! You did an amazing job here dear author! |
Me chapter 3 . 10/8/2018 U are not to stop ,never! |
Elise chapter 3 . 9/30/2018 This is brilliant. Thank you for writing this! |
pikachukite chapter 2 . 5/7/2018 bwhahahahhahahaahahahahaha! XD |
BooksAreMedicine chapter 3 . 12/8/2017 Lol, Raven is such a cool OC. I wish he could be a part of Zuko's guard or something...he and Blue Spirit could have a mission together. I'd love to see Toph fight the Dai Li again. Way to go Zuko! |
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 12/8/2017 Finally Zuko gets some recognition for his skills. It's pretty impressive that he made enemies and fear from two kingdoms |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2017 This was hilarious. Loved it. |
Hiniwalay chapter 3 . 6/18/2017 hahahahaha poor Raven. Never thought someone would find out like this! I'm beside myself in glee. |
Hiniwalay chapter 2 . 6/18/2017 I notice you have a hell lot of typos, misused homophones, and misspellings and could really use a beta. But I love the fic! Hilarious haha, and I'm really excited to know what will happen next. I WANT people to realize that the Blue Spirit is actually the Fire Lord so that Zuko can get some recognition and we can see some really amusing reactions, but that would probably cause a lot of problems for Zuko. |
Hiniwalay chapter 1 . 6/18/2017 cool XDD and so the legend lives on, probably to be highly exaggerated till no one can distinguish the truth anymore (and for Aang to laugh at Zuko's expense) |
janechong chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 Zuko would be a good Batman indeed, instilling fear and all. |