Omg. I am laughing so hard!

So much tension tbh! SO MUCH

Oh no

Uh ohhh

I hope paz lets herself be happy and have friends

Lol. Eric still does not know she is from erudite?

I am already in love with paz!

dear lord, please please please write the sequel! I need to know what happens!

I am so freaking sad that this ended this way :( I seriously hope to sweet baby Jesus you write a sequel to this because I’m dying to know what happens after

Great chapter

omfg it's been so long since i've seen a notification for one of your stories? i thoroughly enjoyed this chapter (for some reason i remember exactly what happened in the last one despite not having read it for probably two years lmao) and i hope that updating becomes a trend! i'm very much missing your other stories and i hope that i see more of you in my inbox lol

btw paz has the patience of a saint. if my friends (or even my family tbh) dumped their ketchup drenched hell fries onto my crispy golden ones, i would probably run away from home.

so precious and perfect and oh my GOD I hope you plan to continue this. I adore Paz. and fuck the kids in this chapter with her are so cute, prob my favourite divergent story tbh you've incorporated so many aspects.

Awe - such a sweet moment but so sad for little Nova

cute with the nicknames

Interesting