Such a good story but the last three chapters utterly ruined it. Too much bullshit overall, from your boring AF immortal, unbeatable cliche OC villain, to Naruto and Ichigo beig turned back in age, and finally the battle being drawn out beyond the point of utter boredom.

The only nice thing that happeded was that Masaki was brought back, but even that can redeem the chapters.

honesty while i loved this story so far, yout villain is a truly bad written villain...way to take the fun out of your first real action sequence, by creating a character that's pretty much a badly written version of Fourth Shinobi War Kabuto.

I'm pretty iffy on whether or not I believe that Ichigo has chakra when not in his body. When you look at what soils have done in the Naruto universe then yeah I can see it. But on the flip side if chakra is composed of physical and spiritual components then you shouldn't be able to make it if you don't have a physical form right?

I mean even if everyone can see Ichigo as a shinigami and interact with him it doesn't change the fact that he his entirely composed of reishi and from where he comes from, a soul.

Now mind you souls have done some interesting things in the Naruto verse, looking at the Sage and Obito lending Kakashi his eyes, and I wouldn't be too surprised if they could still use the already existing chakra but realistically speaking I don't think they should be able to make more considering their lack of a body.

Also I just re read the whole story and I noticed that you never explained how Yuzu found out Karin was in trouble at Suna? I mean I liked the scene with Ichigo busting in and kicking ass but how did Yuzu find out before Ichigo and the rest of the Leaf?

Otherwise good story, even if at times it feels like we skipped ahead for no explicable reason.

Yeesh Ichigo. Stop crediting yourself with Zangetsu's work. He's the one who broke through hell's gates

Okay. Thats good. Thats a lot more control than I thought.

Okay ... this is really realistic. I CAN see Central 46 pulling shit like this. They executed Toushiro's friend just because he also had Hyourinmaru. That was even pettier than this.

Not only that, I like how you didnt make the captains jackasses. It was squad zero who did it. It means at least that the captains maaaaay appear in the story? Hopefully?

Also, Ichibei is a piece of shit. Read the CFYOW light novel, you'll understand how much of a piece of shit Ichibei is. He's even worse than Yhwach. Even Aizen was upset with the shit Ichibei pulled. AIZEN!

oh. so ichigo has not yet gotten his ehm... true zanpakuto yet then. omoshirou

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This is my favorite Bleach/Naruto cross fits and I check end up rereading it every time I check in to see if there's been in update. Its got great beats of humor and action.

More chapter please.

Damn, that's one drawn out battle. And lots of stuff going on.
Naruto at 15 is such a cuty pie and naive sunshine, isn't he?
I hope most of the possessed people will still be alive when this is all over.

And it just gets better *partial sarcasm*
I was surprised Ichigo didn't go "not another Yhwach" (though maybe he did think that).
You are evil, you know that? To end it at such a cliffhanger.

And everything is heating up. If they catch Ichigo before he charges ahead, they might actually stop him in time. Because he might not be strategic, but he is good at tactics, and knows value in getting more information and some kind of plan in place first. Let's just hope their authority and Ichigo's trust in them is great enough. Like it was for people around him before he charged into Hell after Yuzu

Makes sense that smaller Villages would be more aware of the kidnappings going on, simply because they have smaller population and everyone is more valuable and therefore not as easily dismissed when missing. Another reason why Danzo and Oro managed to have all those experiments and kidnappings under Konoha's nose for so long.
And of course Ichigo found trouble. At least this time it worked to everyone's advantage. Though I guess that is typical of him, he is a lynchpin after all.
Hanabi and Konohomaru are asking for it. But at least this way they will get better and more prepared. It will just take time. And a lot of patience. Because they will need to learn to separate reiryoku from chakra.

"Nope, we just did it to check if you could, not because now we are gonna run you into ground to master it." - Ichigo is so confused now, that's not how things usually go for him. And it's not even the usual, you will learn it later under duress; Yamato point blank considers it will be useless under circumstances. LOL