Excellent. Would love to see this expanded.

Cute, cute, cute :)

Awe.

Supercute! I like the idea of Hyde letting her sleep with him for support. It's a very intimate thing, trespassing mere friendship boundaries. Loved it!

This is both a cute and sweet chapter. I like that Hyde lays a shirt on his dresser for Jackie every day - and that Jackie wears it. You write Hyde's enjoyment of this well and of his clear adoration for Jackie. I hope we get more T7S fic from you! :D

Wow! Super nice! I enjoyed it :)

I liked this. Kelso, while he had some good qualities, was a dumbass. Their relationship showed the typical teenage true wuv bullshit we all experience. But Hyde makes Jackie actually feel special. It especially reminded me of the episodes during Season 5, when Jackie finally moved on.

An enjoyable one shot

I really enjoyed this one-shot! It held my attention all the way through, and it's something that could have happened on the show had a few details been different.

Comments (and laughter) on specific lines below.

(From the beginning, where it had started as a few tears and a sniffle. To the middle, when it was strong and heart aching, red-faced, broken sobbing, coughing. To the end when it was slow and shaky, ragged breathing and puffy eyes.) - I really like your description here and Hyde's suspicion that he'd been the only one to witness Jackie's full cycle of crying.

(He looked at her for while, before sighing and opening his arms.) - It's like Hyde's acquiescing to the fact he cares so much about her.

("Since when do you care if I'm cheating on Jackie or not?" Kelso rolled his eyes. "It's not even your business."

For some reason, this inflamed Hyde's anger) - For "some" reason? Hyde gives the reason a line up: ("Because man, every time you do that cheating bull, she comes crying to me.") Jackie's made it Hyde's business, and he can't help himself. *lol*

("It became my business when she spends hours crying on me over you!) - Oh, and there we go. *lolol* I think he knew it all along.

("Since you can't seem to make a decision, I'll make one for you. You're breaking up with Jackie.") - I like it! :D Jackie might kick his ass for this, but Hyde's protective side has come out.

("Man, you gotta understand that sometimes I need a little more than Jackie.") - Ugh. Stupid Kelso. If he wants to fool around with more than one girl, fine. He just has to be upfront about it. He doesn't need Jackie if he's going to be with other girls. He's gotta let her go.

(In the doorway he stood for a little, before turning back to Kelso. "Any man who needs more than Jackie, is a damn fool.") - Sing it, brother!

(I'm Jackie Burkhart and I deserve better.") - Yes, you do.

("For this, I know you hate the crying, and the girly stuff. I'm surprised you didn't run when you saw me crying.") - I like that she acknowledges him this way.

(Kelso smiled and nodded. "Yeah, see when you caught with that girl yesterday, I began thinking-"

"Is that [why] we smelled smoke yesterday?"Eric chuckled.) - I agree with Hyde. Respectable burn. *lol*

("I began thinking and I realized something. Maybe I need more than you. But, that was totally wrong, because any man who needs more than my Jackie is a damn fool." Kelso smiled right in Hyde's direction.) - Oh, God ... someone needs to shove Kelso under a tractor. *rofl*

("Awe, Michael." She grinned. Hyde wanted to vomit, she was going to take him back like she always does. "I don't think I've ever heard more bull come out of one man's ass.") - Yay! She's woken up! Love it.

(I am a diamond, do you hear me? A DIAMOND. You had a diamond and you could have kept it, but you wanted to go play with slutty rocks instead.") - LOL You tell him, Jackie!

(Eric was the first to speak for the flabbergasted teens. "Would we like to do this guys?" He asked everyone. They all nodded. Fez and Hyde pushed their chairs back, Donna and Eric moved the sofa back. Fez went into the freezer and grabbed a pack of frozen vegetables, Eric scraped some ice off the side. They both rushed at Kelso. Fez pressing the vegetables against his skin, and Eric threw the ice over his head.

"Guys! What the hell!?" Kelso roared, backing away from them.

"We just thought you'd need some ice for that BURN.") - Wow, that's elaborate! Kelso must've been curious about what they were doing so wait while they got it all done. He'd be dumb enough to do that and not to run.

("I just can't believe he really thought he could buy some cheap flowers, come rushing in, use your words, and think I'd come back." If Hyde had been drinking water, he would've spit it out, everywhere.

"Wha-wha-what do you mean my words?" He stumbled out."Those aren't my words, I said no words, you're crazy.") - LOLOLOL Awesome. Love that Jackie knows what Hyde said earlier and Hyde's reaction to it.

("Thanks." She smiled after a few seconds.

"For what?"

"For being Hyde.") - Aww, that's sweet.