So, after five years, I remembered your fic and came to check on it. It's probably a little late to ask for chapter six, but if you updated this... well, that would be awesome. Not just awesome, but extremely awesome.

That was my favorite chapter out of the whole fic. Loved reading it.

Great chapter! Can't wait to read about the family meal. I can just imagine Madge reacting exactly like that.

I'm a huge Scott and Charlene fan but, apart from mentions recently by their son on Neighbours, have heard nothing about them in years (yes, i do know they're not actually real!) Reading this story was like finishing a box of your favourite chocolates, then discovering another layer underneath!

I love the way you've shown Charlene's vulnerable side and acknowledged that anyone who had an abortion at 15 is likely to have doubts about a subsequent pregnancy. Love the (very accurate) descriptions of the tactile relationship they had on the show. Especially love Clive being in there!

Can't wait to read about them back on Ramsay street (soon please?) but please keep in some scenes with just the two of them...

All I want for Christmaaaaaaas is... chapter five.

CHAPTER FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE! That is all.

I can't find chapter five. (Hint, hint.)

SHANE! I love that he was in this chapter. Debby is the sweetest, but I feel really sorry for her because she's gonna miss Charlene. I LOVE that Charlene was happier in this chapter and more excited about the baby. The parts where her and Scott are talking and joking with each other and just being generally cute together are adorable. The end to this chapter was awesome. They're officially going back now - woo!

Chapter four, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?

OH MY GOD! CLIVE. E.
Ugh I love Charlene so much and Debby is a cutie. I also love how Scott is a bit more understanding. 3 Loved everything about this chapter.

Aah - cliffhanger again! As always, you captured their characters perfectly and this chapter (which is my favorite so far) is really well written. I love the cute moments between them. Heh, the mention of Scott's mullet made me laugh. If the next chapter is up soon, I'll be very happy. Can't wait for them to go back to Ramsay Street. Love this fic.

NEIGHBOURS... EVERYBODY NEEDS GOOD NEIGHBOURS...

CHAPTER 3! CHAPTER 3! CHAPTER 3!

*waiting for chapter three*

I love everything about this article, your really talented and I hope you carry on writing, because this is really amazing and well done