Marvellous story. Congrats author and beta for this piece of art that could be a book in itself. Definitely worth my time

Hey there.

I started reading this fanfic during a PJO obsession phase when I was about 13. I wasn’t nearly mature enough to understand LGBTQ issues, the idea of “coming out”, or really the necessities of healthy interpersonal relationships. Nonetheless, I found myself addicted to this fanfiction, because the premise was so novel to me. Unfortunately, at that time, only chapter 29 was published.

I remember checking every Thursday to see if a new chapter was released. Eventually, I read chapter 30, but I eventually lost interest, as weeks passed.

Now, four years later, mid-coronavirus, I found myself once again obsessed with PJO. I reread the novels, then HoO, then Magnus Chase, etc. And when I finished those over the course of a few weeks, I turned to fanfiction. I came back to this website and noticed this fanfiction. I remembered how much I liked it four years ago, so I decided to reread it. And to my great joy, it was completely finished.

I have only praise. It has been a long wait. I have to say it was worth it. After four long years, this fanfiction gave me even more emotion, tension, joy, and nostalgia than before. This is one of the greatest fanfictions I’ve ever read. I am so glad that I read this. Thank you.

This is probably my facorite chapter just because of the slide thing, but the entire story was really well written.

I've really missed these boys... Nico Valdez JasonFrank

uhhh..idk how and exactly what to say .. but first , hats off to u sir/mam .. i think its mam ..us guys can't do a story like this . hard to admit this but yes i teared up quite a few times , in the final run of the last 7 chapters..the story was perfect, not cheeky , a bit realistic , funny and basically allround romantic . coming to percabeth i find this side of me (romantic and cheezy). but i pray this to god , if i can ever meet u , i at least .. wanna treat u and meet ur beta testers as well since they also helped .. but in all honesty(some credit to my vivid imagination )this didn't feel like a fanfic(least grammatical errors, perfect plot, excellent vocab and ohh i can go on and on) .it felt like an actual novel written by a seasonal author. idk if u ll even read this , but if u do , well here is to hoping u all the happiness. the story touched me deeply. idk why but it did..so thank you from the bottom of my heart once again.

U had me me hanging for dear life to this story thank you thank you and thank you

Fucking kill mark. Fucking... fucking MARK

THIS IS THE BEST PERCABTH FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ AND BELEIVE ME I READ ALOT

This is amazing ... Like perfectly written to the very core ... Loved it .
Nice to see such end of the story so perfectly I literally cried .

adhahaskl this was crossposted on ao3 rightt

I couldn’t have imagined a better way for you to end this story

This actually made me cry...
Your writing is so beautiful, and the story is amazing. You perfectly mixed the love story with the realistic issues of a decision like Annabeth’s and the teenagers’ problem such as their sexuality.
I’m pretty difficult to please when it comes to a fanfiction, but I fell in love with yours.
With all my love,
Just a girl...

Just wanted to let you know that I stayed up until 6 am reading your story

I’m just wondering if the tainted clothes thing was a reference to FRIENDS...

I don't think I've ever cried about a story when rereading this. This piece of art holds a special place in my heart. I have only one word to describe it. Masterpiece