| Reviews for TMNT: Strain |
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LadyDogDemon chapter 1 . 5/3 Might want to change the rating The GD word makes this a M rating. |
Shinigami-Mercury chapter 1 . 12/26/2014 I can honestly say I've never been so turned on by a friggin boot. ... Anyway, nice job. That was perfect. :3 |
Terri chapter 1 . 12/21/2014 Goddam! Read this again for like the 10th time so awesome! The sexual tension is sooo heavy! I love it! |
Rio's Desire chapter 1 . 10/27/2014 This was great! |
RaphieApple chapter 1 . 10/23/2014 I love Donatello's appearance. xD It was amazing. |
Commander Allie chapter 1 . 10/15/2014 I would have the exact same reaction around him. He isn't my Donnie, but he's pretty damn sexy. XD |
RedLion2 chapter 1 . 9/1/2014 What woman wouldn't want that focused, careful attention? You do a beautiful job of conveying what April is not only thinking, but feeling. And Raph is at his best, a little snarky, still tough, but clearly enjoying taking care of her. It was cute when he so adamantly said he could handle taking care of her. So enjoying these moments between them. |
bloodyblond chapter 1 . 8/17/2014 These continue to be extremely well written and are slowly inching their way up to becoming some of the best one-shots I've ever read. And I mean that in terms of EVERY one shot (across a handful of different 'verses) I have read in the space of the 12 odd years I've been reading. I enjoyed the cheekiness to their first interaction. The playful flirtiness that the probably don't even realize they're doing. And that April still manages to be sarcastic despite the pain she's obviously in speaks to how awesome you continue to make her character. Like in Risks when we see Raph's PoV when April is fixing him up, I enjoy seeing her thoughts as he returns the favour. (Quick question out of curiosity, are these ones shots a continuation of the same timeline or do they all stand alone?) I like the fact that she doesn't seem to see a turtle (or what have you) when she looks at him, and that she doesn't seem to be ashamed or particularly bothered by the fact that she's attracted to him. I'll admit at this point you're killing me with the UST. It's like watching a tv show and rooting for a pairing to get together only to see it happen somewhere around Season Four... I guess what I'm trying to say is, that as much as I love seeing the buildup, please... please don't make me wait four years for it... :D Keep up the awesomeness. |
SewerUrchin chapter 1 . 8/14/2014 Love, love, love the banter between Raph and April. They're not afraid to give each other grief, but it sort of borders on foreplay. At least I hope it does. ANYWAY. Possessive!Raphael is the best! He doesn't want anyone to tend to April except him. I love the slow burn, love the tension, the dialogue, the in-character-ness, all of it! God help anyone who ever tried to hurt April, sheesh! X) Thanks so much for writing, you're making my days! Cheers! Meg |
Aly009 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014 Thank you so much for a tmnt 2014 moviefanfict a raph abd april... Love the unspoken sexual tention the possesivenessraph feels and how weakneed he makes her... please please please write more like idk 30 chapters :-D |
anifares chapter 1 . 8/14/2014 I'm not sure you can write enough of these 2k14 one-shots. You capture everything about their new incarnations so well, and it's ridiculously entertaining to read. PLEASE write more :-) |
LoveTurtles chapter 1 . 8/14/2014 Love this story already. Cannot wait for the next one! |
GlowingGreenEyes chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 I love all these ;) great job on raph and improvement on april |
DragonCurse4 chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 I hope you keep making a whole lot more of these. These 2k14 Raphril's are AWESOME! |
chichi chapter 1 . 8/13/2014 Dont mean to monopolize you review board, but, why didn't she ask him to kiss it better? Or he could've offered. Or does he think it's only for when he gets hurt? Anyway, thanks again.; |