This made me laugh - some of their reactions are hilarious! The format was a bit weird, but meh.

I thought i was funny and written in an interesting way. You have written the characters in a "real" way and the dialogue flowed well between each character.

I have to applaud you for writing in 100 % dialogue. It is a challange to make it understandable to the reader, while not trying to overexplain which one of the characters that were speaking. But i thought you pulled it off quite well.

Keep writing and have fun with it.