Crap

Aww

WTH this isn't anything. Grr!

Lol false advertising.

Well, it's not smut as I Expected, but it was cute!

That wasn't smutty

I liked that ,more than ,you should've made it more like we handle it in our is how it should've been:It was a moonless night,and Peter and Glamora were out on the tarise.
"Well,"said Peter.
"Not much."said Glamora.
Sudenly,Glamora reached over to Peter and told him to shut his ,slowly,pukered her lips and kissid
him on the lips for 30 was suprised and ,slowly,kissed Glamora on the lips again.
They kissed on the lips the rest of the they never mentined it to anyoene.

P.S.,theres a boy I like at my name's story is how I want my first kiss with him to be.
Exept it be at daytime,not nighttime. :D:D:D

Just to point this out because you said it was smut in the description you might want to up the rating to M.

You should write more like this, even though you don't ship it you got the concept of their relationship. Awesome fic though!

Very fluffy cute romance story with the two of them. Well written. Keep up the good work.

You. Seriously. Need. To. Continue. PLEASE! I'm begging you to!

This is so amazing. Please please please PLEASE write more!

Served with extra cheese but me likey :)

this wasnt bad you should keep going

This is one of my favorites that I've read so far!