Sweet story... That tend dark... Good story though :'(
(Side note what happend to the dragon ballz )

I. Hate. You. FUCK YOU! Omg I cried! You're a horrible person for killing one of them off! Omg how could you like?! Do you not love me at all?!

Fuck You Bri!
Why'd you have to go and break my heart!
Trunks Marron together for ever! I don't care what you say hoe!

Aha okay, so tantrum aside, it was a great fic. Nice little oneshot, tragic and the ambiguous ending is great. Unsure if Trunks or Mar died but honestly it doesn't matter. The fact they are separated is the main thing. And it's hard to bear!
*cries*

Cute? Nah, I think tormentingly sad is more like it. Nice work ladies!

Dirty little shit! AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! I'm really emotional today...

Okay are you sitting? Well sit down b**** cause this is gonna be long...

Somehow, you always seem to catch this really lovely and breathtaking sweetness to your characters. Like, when you pair someone up, their relationship is always magnificent when you write them out. That's something I don't really see much of because it's usually "passion" that they manifest.

But not you. Not Brii- No, you are in a category of your own. It's like when you see rich people with their dark colored dresses and here comes Bri! With her fabulousness and what not...

What I'm getting at is that you create something between your characters that roots in deeper than just the superficial stuff.

Now, how does this tie in with this story? The better question my Portland friend is, "How does it NOT tie in?"

And the answer is; It does. The amazing ability you posses is showcased throughout this beautiful and intense piece.

Marron and Trunks is a very popular couple among the DBZ fandom. That being said this captivated me in so many ways, with humor and the whole lovey dovey thing. And let me tell you! If it's not crack, I' not really interested (unless it's Goku and Chi-Chi)

But your story really does capture the TruMar's relationship majestically.

Now onto the little Cuban ball of fire: Mia.

Is there no end to your abilities chica? Por Dios me vas a dar un infarto! No but seriously, the paragraph you crafted was... beyond words. The first line really got to me...

I love how you inject such crazy doses of emotion into the words you put... And how old are you? I've seen people 2x your age who can't even spell to save their lives and here you come striding in with your extensive vocab and awesome figurative language...

I think Imma hit up my girl WC to read this...
And would you look at that, I need to go to sleep XD
Buh-bye!

P.S. Who ever it was that came up with the ambiguous ending; I hate you. Dick move... I think I'm gonna cry in the corner now...

Aha, that was a neat one-shot. Kind of reminds me of those days where I'm having the time of my life then BAM, seconds later things go down the shit hole.
Anyways, I thought this was worth reading and turns out I was right. Good job!

BRIII IM CRYING!
I'm leaning towards Marron, but there are some things here that make me lean towards Trunks too. Damn it confusing endings!
-WritersFantasy