this story aimed to be very good, what you managed to write caught me immediately, so sad that you cannot continue, at least for now, hopefully one day you will succeed

Hey, i love your story and have been following ir since the beginning. Where can que follow your work? Do You work with an alias?

To the the last Guest reviwer:
Fuck off, you cunt! Not every story gets finished on here! That's life!

How sad to hear that, thanks for one more chapter, you made me go back 3 chapters back to better enjoy reading. the truth is that the rhythm never decreased, nor the quality of the story, i've really really enjoyed every bit of it, and I hope someone as good as yourself will continue in another FF.

I wish you Success!

Well, the fact that you’re just leaving it unfinished is depressing. And a huge let down. Thanks for the tease. You’re very much like Katherine.

Wow, this is an amazing story and although I don't know you, how great is it to see another Delena writer branching out and becoming a published writer! I know Elvishgrrrl did, AnglcDmn1986, Trogdor19, Goldnox, they've all published original works, you can buy them on Amazon right now. I hope you get there too. I do know though that they had to delete their Delena versions to be able to publish them as original works. Reach for the stars and make your dreams come true.

I also agree with another reviewer that if your heart was truly in this fanfiction, it would've been marked complete a very long time ago. I respect that your heart doesn't lie with it anymore. And I respect you as a writer for being able to admit that. That takes courage too. Don't let anyone guilt you into continuing something if you don't love it anymore. If you're going to put energy and effort into reworking this story, that time is probably best spent in the quest to fulfill your dream?

VERY GOOD LUCK TO YOU!

I think it's great that you want to turn this into an original story. Who knows - maybe you'll be the next E. L. James!
All I ask is that you let us know if you publish it so I can run out and buy a copy!

OK, this story is great i've spent most of the day reading it and I've loved it so far. Please update soon, because I can't wait to see what happens next.

I read that you weren't going to continue to update on this fic, but i only ask that you write at least one more chapter to give the fic an ending or maybe writing an epilogue just so we have closure on what the characters are up to and if relationships have changed.

Please and thank you

Can you please reconsider and continue this?

I have read your fanfiction almost 4 times and it is one of my favorite ones on this site despite it being incomplete. I understand that you have grown and you want to discontinue it and I completely respect that. I do hope you reconsider because it is a really good fanfic, but that is completely your choice. Please let us know if you get to publish this. I will be one of your first buyers lol. Thank you so much for writing this!

Hello there, I'm one of those who were addicted to this story from the first day they read it. I was really surprised to see that you updated it so thank you. I really love it and well I hope you will still update and that you're are healthy and happy even though the world is kinda chaotic right now. Thanks again it's one of my bestest story

Hi
I just found your story and read it and I love it, it really evokes feelings of elation. I’m so sorry and so sad to hear you won’t be finishing it, so many fanfictions are being abandoned but with the show having ended so long ago I understand why. I hope you do update us when you publish it as an original fic on any platform. I’ve seen a lot of Delena fics turned to original fics on Wattpad. Good luck, I hope maybe you find the inspiration to finish this fic and many more stories in the future :)

Truly hope one day I can see your “original” version of Dark Horse be published. I really do love the way you frame your stories, it is simple and easy to digest and visualise. These days there are a lot of platforms for writers to embarked on, perhaps you’ll fine your ways in one or more. Cheers

Wow! I loved how this chapter encaptures such an adventure ! Your writing continues to evoke such great vibes and I hope when you complete your original version people can view that story in amazement! I was so happy to see there was an update because this is one of the best reads on this site! If you do decide to finish it, you'll always have me as a reader! Even if you don't, I respect you and your work! Reach for the sky! I wish you the best on your journey! Stay safe!

Good luck to you and I really hope your dream comes true to publish this as an original work.
Truthfully I never expected a conclusion to this, if your heart truly in it, I think it would have been finished a long time ago.
You'll probably have to delete this as other author's have when they chose to rewrite their stories but do let us know if you ever reach your dream and it becomes available to purchase.
Again best of luck.