| Reviews for The Hybrid |
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Princess.of.Slytherin666 chapter 10 . 7/5/2016 I really like the story and the plot line, but Monica is just such an Amity. The way you are making her makes it seem that she is a divergent or she got Amity instead of Dauntless. |
E chapter 17 . 4/22/2016 Thanks. But try adding an epilogue. That ends it wonderfully. Also I wanna meet their daughter. Or tiny Tris/Beatrice and Four/Tobias with tiny Monica and Eric ERIC CHILD IS GONNA BE AWESOME.. NEXT GENERATION! BEGIN! |
iamUNSINKABLE chapter 17 . 10/21/2015 Don't work yourself too hard! Sometimes its good to take a break from everything! :) especially if u have been working so hard at college:) wishing you all the best and we will be waiting patiently for more wonderful writing:) xoxoxoxoxo |
aishiteru naru chapter 16 . 10/1/2015 nice |
Vamp lover94 chapter 16 . 9/26/2015 I love your story and I hope you update soon Jessie |
Zaruka chapter 16 . 9/9/2015 Thank you for this nice story :) I'd like to read both your sequels ! I'm following you so I won't miss that :) |
iamUNSINKABLE chapter 16 . 9/8/2015 Awe, its over? :( but ya sequels! Yay! Will def be keep in my eyes peeled for the ANs:) very excited for what you have coming to us:) greatly enjoyed this story:) xoxoxo |
the guttersnipe chapter 16 . 9/8/2015 I am eager to read the installments! |
iamUNSINKABLE chapter 15 . 9/6/2015 Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe! Eric you're so freakin' cute! Seriously loved this! Can't wait for the next update:) xoxoxo |
iamUNSINKABLE chapter 14 . 9/3/2015 Ah, why isn't there more?! Oh Monica, you shoulda just kissed him back, silly Amity, lol. Poor Eric:( He got his feelings hurt:( I like him to have his feelings hurt:) Maybe I'm morbid like that, lol :D Ah and she ran away from her dad?! I understand that would probably be awkward, and those sort of meetings never happen the way you plan them too, or want them too. But I hope she goes and has a nice long talk with him, and I hope her fear of dissapointing him is completely unwarranted:) Can't wait for the next update! |
slayer0507 chapter 14 . 9/3/2015 Argh! Such a good chapter. I hope you have time to update before you go to college. Looking forward to reading more :) |
LifeLoveLoki chapter 14 . 9/2/2015 Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up, but don't overwork yourself :) |
slayer0507 chapter 12 . 8/27/2015 Really liking the story so far and your interaction between Eric and Monica. I really hope you do an update soon :) |
Guest chapter 12 . 8/23/2015 This is absolutely amazing, and it's soooo good. Ugh I can't even explain, like it's just really good and I really love this story! |
iamUNSINKABLE chapter 12 . 8/23/2015 I really love this story, update soon? Pweeeeeeze:) With a Eric on top;) |