I started reading this story from ch28 and I read it all in one breath without stopping till the end! and because my friend here asked me here is my review!;))))
What I like is; ch are relatively short making it easy to read and more interesting!
this is probably my fav crossover ever! Yuna is fantastic songstress! lolz ;)))
and concert is so well described I feel like I was there! lolz

and next ch29 is written in relaxed easy going atmosphere making it realistic!(probably hardest thing to imagine here for me was L with a book! lolz and her reaction when,,, no spoilers!;)))) lets just say I like how well fiction here is mixed with reality! (lolz bills;)))

and the ending,,, idk what to say,,, so surprising and well written! I don’t want to spoil anything for you but if you start reading this story YOU HAD TO read it till the end!;)))

one small remark my English is not perfect but I think I noticed few typos?
i.e song txt in ch28 I believe some words are displaced?(check song text Part8 last line?;)
and I believe I noticed few more in next ch like one letter extra in some words etc?:))
so author should double check before publishing and pay more attention to details or find test readers before publishing?;)))

in any case, talent is here! and I hope one day to read your *original story! ;))))

all best! and keep up with good work! ;)))))

Good chapter, Yuj, and Gadot should've known better than to tear up Lightning's house like that. I don't think Lightning would stay mad for quite that long, but then again, I'd be really peeved if someone tore a part of my house up without good reason.

Hope's interactions with Lightning and Vanille were cute, by the way. Well, this story was pretty epic. I enjoyed it.

Hoo boy, Maqui is so dead. I can only imagine what Lightning would do to Snow's gang for tearing up her house.

Looking forward to next chapter.

Oh wow! This was awesome! I really loved it!

I think this chapter and the previous one were both pretty good, the concert was really cute. I have to admit I like the song 'One Thousand Words' from Final Fantasy X-2.

'Mama Bear mode' doesn't really suit Fang, but that's my opinion. I can't remember saying this before, but I think Hope/Vanille are a cute couple. But I can't say I've read many fics with them as a pairing, I've mostly read Hope/Lightning fics, but its all good.

Looking forward to next chapter.

This chapter was pretty good. Looking forward to the next one. Sorry if I sound a little redundant, there just wasn't much I could say.

Cute chapter, looking forward to the next one. Sorry, I just didn't have much to say, here.

Awesome chapter, and it looks like Cain's gotten his comeuppance. Sucks for that perverted bad guy. Sorry, got a bit carried away with my review on your OC villain. He was a pretty good villain, albeit a bit perverted and deranged. Just giving my opinion.

So anyway, I assume there's still more to the fic? If so, I'm looking forward to next chapter. The Abduction and Palumpolum arcs of this story were epic, but the other parts have been pretty cute so far, as well.

I didn't quite expect to see Barret in this chapter, was that a vague reference to FFVII the way Yuna was a direct reference to FFX? Just wondering.

I like this chapter, I'm already wondering how this will turn out. I kind of think that Yuna and Serah will just get in the way, just can't picture Yuna being much of a fighter as a Songstress, but that's my opinion. Serah...

Well, I can't really say. I mean, Serah does fight in XIII-2, but she had a special moogle to help her. Sorry to spoil that.

Again, I'm looking forward to next chapter. That's quite a cliffhanger. Wonder if Hope and Serah will make it in time to save Lightning.

This story doesn't seem to be getting a whole lot of reviews, this chapter and the previous two are really epic so far. Nice to see the FFXIII party in action, minus Sazh and Vanille, but its still good.

Looking forward to next chapter. Regarding chapter 17, I don't blame you for hating Snow. We all have our opinions.

Another nice chapter. I can't help but wonder where this is going to end... Surprise me, will you?

Both Hope and Lightning have some thing wrong with them. Oh dear.

But is he dead? I wonder what Serah will think of all of this.

Ahh. Very good. Hope blushing after getting kissed by Lightning and Vanille's reaction was probablt my favourite part of the chapter.

Vanille seems to like Hope and I can't wait to see lightnings reaction to her birthday present.