| Reviews for Lonely Days |
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FullTimeFangirl931 chapter 14 . 1/12/2017 Wonderful story, I loved every single chapter! They all are beautifully written and full of emotion |
BlueLion chapter 14 . 11/19/2016 I like this story very much, an interesting chara study on Elsa and an authentic tale of her years of solitude. I hope this is not the last Frozen-story from your feather. I took the liberty and added "Lonely days" to my community list. Please let me know if you have any objections to that. |
Random Writer chapter 14 . 5/15/2016 I love how you made Elsa become the Snow Queen she created. |
Random Writer chapter 3 . 5/15/2016 I love how you don't make Adgar seem like such a terrible person. He seems like he actually want the best for his daughter. Both povs work well either way, but nice Adgar seems like a good person. (The dad anyway. Other writer call him Adgar, but idk if that's his real name) |
fluffyspid3r chapter 14 . 11/30/2015 So...many...feels... |
JasonRyder chapter 13 . 2/16/2015 You'd think that Elsa's room would have a bathroom attached! I also assumed that the castle at least had toilets and running water. |
Jacob Flores chapter 15 . 2/3/2015 Well, I'll certainly follow you. I'm interested in your upcoming fic. |
Making Some Toast chapter 14 . 2/2/2015 Yep. The last chapters definately made me sad. I feel like in chapter 13, Elsa wouldn't fire people unless they spoke ill of Anna or their parents. I noticed that Elsa is more...cruel? maybe bitter? in this story. I kinda like it haha; sorta reminds me of what her personality would have been if she was evil instead. It gives her more personality other than sadness, anxiety, depression, etc. I love that side of her too but I like a variety of things. And I want to say that I love that this is actually from Elsa's point of view! Anna was only mentioned briefly or in passing which truly makes this about Elsa. I love the sisters but both sisters can shine without the other one completely involved. I hope you write more and I'll be looking out to see if you write anything else. Thanks for the emotional roller-coaster! |
Jacob Flores chapter 14 . 2/2/2015 I must admit, for such short updates, they are very powerful. Very well written. So, what now? |
The Writress of Many Fandoms chapter 12 . 1/30/2015 Beautiful. The only thing that bugs me is that in the movie Elsa calls the king "Papa" and not "Daddy/Father". But still an awesome story! |
Jacob Flores chapter 11 . 1/27/2015 Well, I can't wait to cry my heart out. |
Making Some Toast chapter 10 . 1/26/2015 I like the simplicity of this one. Elsa seems like the person who would feel comfort in writing and I like the detail that she does it without the gloves. Just for a moment she can feel normal and not feel the burden that was placed on her. The short appearance of Elsa's mom was adorable too. Going to be honest, I'm afraid what will happen in the next few chapters since she's going to be 18 and her parents aren't going to be there. And yeah I'm expecting sadness; I'm just afraid how much of it! I'm probably going to get a tub of ice cream and tissues for when the other chapters come out! |
Making Some Toast chapter 9 . 1/8/2015 UGGHHH CONFLICTED FEEELINGS. On one hand what Elsa did was rude and horrible, especially that last line. Holy cow the meaning of that is too much for me. But on the other hand, she has missed out on soo many things and she feels hurt. Also jealous that Anna has potential fallen in love before her and maybe a little jealous that someone else can hold Anna and care for her. Another chapter that I love! And I do like that Elsa goes outside more, even if it's just to the garden. A lot of people just write her always inside the castle but I like to think she goes outside at least a few times a year. |
Palinod chapter 9 . 1/8/2015 Very good story so far ! |
showmetheuniverse chapter 9 . 1/7/2015 Ouch... Feeling the feels. Brilliantly written! |