I liked all the unique ideas you had in this story. Your writing needs improvement, but I believe you will get better with time and experience. Thank you for posting.

You should do the story with Daniel when he's older. I really look forward to that!

Oh my God, Kota is the guy version of me!

"Aunt Takashi" XD *dying of laughter* that is just freaking awesome. Like omg I freaking love this story. Are you considering making a sequel? I don't know if there is a sequel... but I so want a sequel!

I love that Cosplay group as well, they are amazing, and yes I have seen that video.

This is the best thing i have ever read. You are awesome.

Both "sequels" sound great! I would love to read both off them. If you do write the second one I hope you stick with Haruhi being male though. This story was also really good. I enjoyed reading it, though I wish there'd been a little more detail with the twins, especially Kaoru and what he was thinking and feeling.

Holy crap I loved your story, and cracked up when I read Mori-senpai as Aunt. You didn't stay close to the actual character structure, but you're writing made up for it. Also I loved what you did keep from the show, and the distinguishing of the twins. I think I'd really like you cuz anyone who sticks 1985 and lilo and stitch in a Japanese fanfic must be fantastic

Male very male, let me know when you post the first chapter of that story.

DAR

Dark Ace Raven

Is it sad that I just noticed that tamaki sounds like Rapunzle's mom from tangled when he mentions the mumbling?

Drama drama drama! None of my friends are like that. Thank the Goddess Nyx.

I know this may seem freaky but Daniel and hunny seems like a nice pairing

I'm taking Daniel and calling him mine *Shifts to a wolf and picks Daniel up by the back of his shirt and walks away* MINE!

DAR

Dark Ace Raven

love it to death need more this is way to good I rely need more I cant take it I need to know what will happen next plezz plezz pezz

love it to death need more plazz plezz plezz