I enjoyed this!

Smart Paul. They put too much confidence in their new toy. But, she doesn't want you anymore, buddy.

HAHAHAA! Paul avoided that quicksand, barely!

Hahaha! I know this is going to be good!

Uh oh...this could be tricky. But interesting that Paul senses the program isn't right.

Hahaha. Sig'dan is so baffled by human behavior.

I'm automatically against this guy. Hahaha!

This is good, though sad that the stories are done.

Very good

This is a good story and you are very funny, but the story is overshadowed by how very sad it is that they kidnapp women and use them this way, even if the Yautja take no pleasure in it. And everyone, even supposedly nice people like Sally and Paul, just compartmentalize by explaining it as necessary and the gov is too afraid of the consequences of resisting. There are women that will carry a baby to term for a couple who cannot have kids, for a price. Perhaps something like that could be worked out. I've read these lost tales, but I dont know if I can read the others.

I loved all of your stories, If i read and don't review, chances are its because i really liked it... (doesn't make much sense i know)

Anyways, keep it up i love seeing your updates !

I liked it. But this entire story felt almost like a prologue of sorts, or something. It doesn't really feel like a completed story, or a stand alone. I feel like there are still a few loose ends to be tied...
That's just my opinion though.

I hope you write about Ulf watching people date! It could be hilarious even thou I think he caught on good enough to get Sal-lee! I love reading Ulf's point of view, thank you for giving us this story. Most authors are not that wonderful!

Your writing's super great 'hon, like always... It's just honestly I don't really enjoy any prequel story. And that, I prefer Sygdan than Ulfr...so... Yeah but this'd be interesting on next updates, yes?

Maxithanksss!

Oooooh date night with Ulfr, how exciting! "I would like to invite you for a a dinner followed by a delightful evening of decapitations, my dear." Plus, I love that he dolled himself up in his version of a tuxedo for Sally and the others noticed his, um, overdress for the occasion. All except for Sally, of course. Did he spritz himself with Yautja Rabonne's 'Eau de Kainde Amedha'?

On a more serious note, so happy to see you continuing with this story, and I, personally, see you developing with each update by immersing yourself more in the concept of alien thoughts and emotions and motivations, in this case to more fully flesh out Ulfr. It makes him feel more real and knowable and relatable. Even if I don't agree with him, I get where he's coming from and that makes all the difference in the world.

You took big chances with Paya's House and I don't think it ended up going the way you originally planned it to go. In the beginning it was light and funny, a joking what-if concept that you fleshed out and followed through with. As you delved deeper and built that world and developed those characters and stayed true to the concept of an alien race having an alien culture, thinking alien thoughts and having alien morals...hell, you ended up blowing up Paya's House and essentially creating an entirely new tale with its characters. Now we get to watch you go back and re-frame those characters, developing non-human motivations and intent within the context of the original premise that kicked your series off, and I personally, LOVE it. Very tough to do, so kudos to you!

Now get back to Ulfr's womb hunt of that undersized ooman who has breasts enough to call herself a Matriarch!