Hmmmm. Its well written.

It is so beautifully written! I really like it, the first chapter just made me smile, it screamed 'warmth'. Had you made it into a oneshot to conserve the happy moment would have been wonderful, but I think we would be too curious to leave you alone 'till you continued it. ;PAnd the second chapter was also very good, though it's somewhat making me anxious for what is to happen next. Really, your story and writing style are just genuinely good and great to read! With that in mind, please update quickly! :)

Awwww Allen and lavi were so cute

Oooh, I can't wait to see what happens next!

This is so cute! Cant wait for more chapters!

This story is sooo amazing! Im excited to see where this goes!

I love it! Love it, I say! 3 I can't wait until you write more. :3 This was a great beginning. I'll be waiting to see how everything develops!