Reviews for Sandstorm
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 3 . 5/20/2018
WOWWWW THIS IS GREATTTTT
Moon Dog 05 chapter 3 . 7/19/2017
Please update soon
Fireball Massacre chapter 2 . 2/20/2015
so far so good.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/5/2015
Please update soons!
Because this is amazing :)
ShinraKeiko chapter 3 . 10/19/2014
Wow. This story has the potential to be so totally awesome! Not sure about Naruto having a dojutsu though... if you stick to canon his parents don't have any bloodline limits. Maybe a specialisation in seals? With his amount of chakra he has the potential to do tons of stuff with it. Nevertheless, it was a great read so far :) Looking forward to your updates!
Scarease chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
this could be good story update soon.
thor94 chapter 3 . 8/26/2014
gaara and naruto are on same team, good. and he waste his stupid jumpsuit.
But i hope you will give naruto his dojutsu soon (hope it will be badass and useful), here he was barely useless.
and hope you will give him more skills than canon.
Like you said, naruto is chakra powerplant, he should obtain a large amount of elemental jutsu (not only wind). And he is an uzumaki, he must obtain the fuinjutsu natural talent from his family and create amazing seal to make his clan proud (the canon naruto is a shame for uzumaki)
buterflypuss chapter 3 . 8/26/2014
good chap
Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
Please not Hinata for the romance or the team actually put Hinata on his team and hopefully she'll faint right onto a kunai she's the most annoying usless pain in the ass around she's the Orihime of Naruto just a waste of space I don't condone abuse of any kind but I can understand why her father does it, ugh!
Nightshadegirl chapter 2 . 8/17/2014
really hope naruto and gaara on are the same team with hinata if possible.
Nightshadegirl chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
this is interesting, i look forward to reading future chapters.
Harbinger-of-script chapter 2 . 8/15/2014
Dude... Fuck... I want more!... To... Much... Awesome!
IamWhatIamBaby chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
nice!
thor94 chapter 2 . 8/14/2014
good chapter.
But what about kage buunshin?
UzumakiKirofu chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
NarutoxTemari and GaaraxIno for the pairing but i really like the context of this story!
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