Te la rifaste Fernando

This still remains my favorite RWBY fanfic. You should write more Roman fanfics.

Love it

nice man short and sweet keeps you interested and doesn't drag on good work wish other creators were like u good job man

I love this idea, and this chapter displays torchwick’s character perfectly! I know I’m a little late reading this

and that's how you be a master criminal on remnant

The way this fanfiction fit nicely in between Torchwick's appearances is impressive, and the stories are pretty realistic from what I know about Roman.
Also, it would certainly explain Ruby's reaction on the airship to Roman's monologue (though the death was fitting, I still have a small hope that he isn't dead).

What if Torchwick staid? What if he was always a teacher?

Loved it XD

Oh, that was wonderfully amusing to read! Quite a good story. I do so enjoy reading about the most dashing criminal in Vale, nay, Remnant! Sweet fic! Good work!

Loved this! I was kinda hoping he would have a change of heart in the end but I'm also glad he didn't in a way because that made this more realistic. You wrote him so in character it's amazing, I can totally see him saying and all these things in this situation. Found a few inconsistencies like when he is disarmed in the Coordination chapter he has his weapon back right after with no explanation. Also the robot fight happened in season one but here you have it after these events which take place after season two. Oh well these are minor details to me in comparison to how well done this was. I read the description of this and was like "ok this is weird but interesting" I didn't expect it to be do great or in keeping with the character's personalities.

Oh, that ending; so good! The Velvet story was probably my favorite. Great job mate!

That last line killed me. It was so perfectly him. The Velvet chapter was my favorite one. This is also a pretty accurate portrayal of Torchwick's cynicism and bitterness at the world. Considering this was written two years ago before volume 3 you should be proud.

I'm liking this

(salutes the author of this fan fiction)

this is a very well made story, sir. u have my respect.