Why is Von Blood so intent on capturing Tom instead of Kaz? His current fight is with Chaor, so it would make more sense to take Kaz and don't say it's because Tom has his and Intress' DNA. Does Von Blood want To for a whole personal matter?...yeash, I think I just scared myself!

Update again soon!

Wow, good chapter! This is really getting on a roll! Kick Von Bloot's butt and update soon!

Amazing job! Is there going to be a pairing? What happened to Von Bloot? Update soon!

Will Tom get his own type of powers or normal creature powers? Maybe combine the two! Oh, this is so exciting!

So far, it's pretty good, but I think it could use a touch of more detail. Like how different Tom looks now, speaking of which, is Tom going to get a new name while he's female? Is he going to want to turn back? Will he end up falling in love with someone? What about Kaz and his possible new form or does he not have one?

I wonder how Sarah and Peyton will react to these news? Anywho, update soon!

Okay, I don't want to be mean, but I'm seeing a lot of errors in this with your grammar. Also, this chapter would have been nicer to read if you made more detail.

I think it's a great story idea, but I still think you need to work on it some more.