Still waiting for your next arc

I absolutely love this story, by FAR one of my favorites!

will kasumi alpha gain her own identity and be paired with naruto and will a spirit in mind scape like minato and kushina's chakra ghosts, ayame, offhand comment by the scientist in charge be what causes her to second guess her self and if so will she be call3d alpha or kasumi's grandmother's name.

so asuka is either the reborn priestess/ pseudo hime/damiyo of the land of demons shion or a member of her line?

Loving this story.

I know I could be wrong but some how I get the feeling that this Hien Tsuin might end up as another one of Naruto’s wife at some point. I wonder what’s up with that and what else you might have in mind for her in later chapters.

I’ve read this story once already and after reading this chapter again I realized that there was never anything said about whether or not Hinata tried to heal Hayate. If she did try I wonder why she couldn’t heal him for.

I’m thinking they were either to busy for her to get the time to try to heal him or she just didn’t have the needed skill for it but I could be wrong on both reasons.

I do wonder what you have or had in mind for the newer chapters and I really hope that the stories go as you planned on instead of listening to what others think things should be going unless your having trouble.

I do look forward to reading more chapters of your able to and I’m also really happy that Naruto and Hinata are together in this and a few of your others stories.

Finally caught up to the last chapter, I have to admit, I got quite attached to the characters.

So Asuka will end up dying to redeem her sins... She's quite tragic.

So Asuka is a (direct?) descendant of Shion? Things have gotten interesting.

Nice story here. I wonder when there might be an update for this story though. So far it’s the fourth story you have that I’ve really liked and hope you update more of sometime soon if you get the time in real life to do so.

Only things I really know about this story are things that has to do with Naruto and Hinata. Everything else I’m still at a loss on for the most part so I can’t really give a better review.

It’s a NaruHina story so that got my interest for the most part but I do like how things are going in this story and it also has me looking some things up here and there to get familiar with it.

I do wonder if Naruto and Hinata’s age are accurate though since it feels they should at least be 18 or 19 by now. Weren’t they 16 when they ended up in the future? I’m just going by what I’m able to remember from all the info I have from reading this story so far.

I'm not really a big fan of the "Villain gets bloodsample of MC for cloning and other sinister purposes" typ stories; they can be very good, but there are just so many of them... In this case I had a thought: while Donovan POSSIBLY could clone someone with chakra but it would be useless to him as the Chakrasystem has to be activated and the usage of it has to be learned (both isn't instinctual or automatic at the beginning) and Donovan neither has someone with knowledge about both nor the centuries of trial and error discovery the original Shinobis had... It would be funny though to see him sink a lot of ressources and when finally succeding realising that all of it was for nothing because of the aforementioned points; reading about him raging would be awesome and funny.

Well, in regards to Asukas past: in the wise words of Master Oogway "there are no accidents". It sounds like a set up by Ishtaros and in hindsight not even a very good one... I wonder what Asukas reaction to thi will be and if she'll continue to follow Ishtaros. Maybe once Naruto dealt with Ishtaros and her twin Asuka will take her place as a leader of the fiends, which doesn't sound like a bad outcome as she seems more interested in some form of co-existence than creating mayham and destruction for shit and giggles unlike most other fiends.

I await, Your next entry.

Now DOA 1 is finished. There are so many other sequel arcs to do. I hope you will update soon