This story has taken a serious left turn. I really like your writing style and I'm in deep with these characters and how much it took to get where they are. Are we seriously going to pile more heavy-heavy on these fragile shoulders?

This was such an amazing story!
Definitely an emotional roller coaster that i couldn’t stop reading until i finished the entire story. I enjoyed reading a story where Edward was the strong one and the one to ultimately save Bella in the end.
I would love to see this book expanded and maybe published...
I hope you continue to write!
You are an amazing writer!

What was Bella's life like when her and Renee were living with Charlie in Georgia? I mean if he is able to provide her a nice home with the modern amenities now, I imagine that is how she grew up. So it's not like this should be all that new to her.

I think you mean "weren't" when you write "won't." It's "it weren't my choice." Trust me.

It's PER SE (Latin for "by or in itself"), not PER SAY.

Wow

Ugh I love them! This is my favorite part of a story, the build up. I’m already nervous from the prologue

This is getting really disturbing...why would you write this? Im all for a Edward and bella story but this is gross and fucked up.

He does NOT love her

I knew he was a gross piece of shit

I glossed over this cause it was nasty.

his name is so dumb

Edward seems fake as fuck and Bella? Shes so damn dumb.

Well that was .…..weird

This was amazing. Thank you!