Enjoyed the story so far, love the bromance between Shep and Garrus.

Hope you decide to continue with this story, looking forward to it!

I really like all of the Kasumi/Miranda interaction. Always fun and fitting.

great chapter

Nice chapter.

Outstanding chapter. Maybe Mordin can help Miranda solve her fertility issues. Please continue.

Another awesome chapter keep them coming. As to Miranda's condition, I kind of hope there is a way to fix it, gee if only they knew a brilliant doctor and geneticist who had the experience, drive, and skill necessary to create a groundbreaking new treatment for her condition...

Keep it up and I hope you update soon.

Regards

Lord Halcyon

The one thing I've really noticed in your story since I've begun reading it, is that you tend to misspell some words, especially when it comes to more scientific topics or typical mistakes like "their" instead of "they're". Keep an eye out for that.
The rest of the story is great really, though personally I feel you haven't changed up enough. You could have gone for more change and a better and deeper explanation of Shopard's and Miranda's relationship. At this moment in time, I am left unsure, if Miranda is actually interested in Shepard or if she is just using him or a little bit of both. A bit more clarity on that would be appreciated.
Your character interactions are really well done and I've laughed a lot about the banter between Shepard and Garrus. It would be nice, if you got the others into it more, too, now that they have been with them a good while.
I hope to see more of your story soon. Far too many Mass Effect stories stood somewhere along the way and never pick up again. Have fun writing!

Love the dialogue between Shepard and Garus, honestly some of the best I've seen. Awesome story and I'm looking forward to more.

Excellent job writing your version of Samara's loyalty mission. Please continue.

Nice way to deal with Morinth. Making Shepard say the names of his friends to resist Morinth was awesome

great chapter!

I love how its Miranda that allows him to break Morinths hold. I any case fantastic chapter and I hope you update soon.

Regards

Lord Halcyon

a good chapter but i dont reallu dwell to much in samara's loyalty mission as far as i am concerned its one of the duller ones and never caused to much of a turmoil of indecisioni have killed her every single time. in the fight paragraph you wrote morinth instead of samara, i guess you let morinth play with sherpards mind for plot reasons but i dont remember the choices of dialog to lead to that taking into account that this sherpard is almost fully paragon at this point.

Shepard may not be able to speak italian naturally but he would still be able to understand what the ladies were saying because in the ME world there exists a little thing called a universal translator now this device might not have every language spoken by every race in citadel space but it would most certainly have the most used languages of every council and associate race for example the major dialects of thessia palaven sur'kesh and of course earth such as english spanish french german chinese japanese arabic Hindi and absolutely italian. Sorry for the rant:)

Wonderful chapter. LOL at Zaeed's reaction to being bugged. Looking forward to more.