Great story, I'm deeply impressed and a little irritated. But the story is great! You created such a ... heavy mood.

Perhaps it's silly to leave a review on a story that's almost a decade and a half old (what chance is there that you'll get this? what chance is there that you still have the same interests you did back then).

Still, I can't help but leave this. Because I think this is one of the most elegantly unfolded bits of emotion I've read.

Thanks for writing.

While I didn't quite get the parts that are in first person, I really like the bulk of this story. It's thought-provoking.

Wow. just...wow. :)

::shivers:: i think i read this already, but it was just as good the second time. excellent writing.

a little odd...hard to understand...depressing