Oh my! You used Bengali words and sentences in your fic! I love you so much for it! Eso sokhi, tomay alingone badhi (Let me hug you, friend :D)

A tiny criticism: Not independent doesn't mean "Oswadhin", I've never heard this word. But "Poradhin" could be better.

Oh no...you killed Tsubasa? :( Poor boy.. sniff sniff T_T
But it had to be...sometimes someone has to sacrifice for defeating the darkness, the evil. Mone nei amader muktijuddher kotha? :')

Good fic :D
Misty _

Ya Allah! How fucking rules they are! Nobody is allowed to pray? Musics and melodies are prohibited? No friendship, only enmity? And marriage...is restricted? A holy, pure and beautiful bond like marriage...Are you sure it's being on this planet? On mother earth?! Mother, how can you bear so much cruelties *Sniff sniff*

There...I haven't watched Metal fight beyblade yet, just watched normal beyblade. But from this fic, pretty much I can guess that Nemesis is an evil power and Gingka and Masamune are good. Going to read the second chapter! :D

-Misty _

So you probably won't read this, seeing that you haven't been updating for over a year now, but you are an amazing writer and please keep writing, no one else that I've seen had thougt to write about what would happen if Nemisis took over the world, very creative and has to do with the Butterfly Effect, which I'm a fan of it makes games that much more intresting to know that your chocie will effect something really puts a different aspect on how you play the game knowing that your ending won't be the same as someone else's. So this has a sad ending, but who said life has all happiness, I really hope if you continue this it doen't end sadly but hey the fate of the story is up to you. And if you do end it sadly, i'll still be ok with that. Sorry this was so long and had probably had a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and the whole Butterfly effect rant but still please keep witing, you said to reveiw and that is what I did.

Do update soon

Oh wow, Rachis, this was so melancholy it touched my heart. It's so sad D:

Cool I like it.

Awesome chapter. keep working on it

Whoa, exciting! I can't wait to read more :3