I loved this story
Why did you stop
Sad face

ch 9

Stoic was sceptical , and he plated the fear and hate he supports just seeing monsters and nothig more .
Only the elder knows but she is silent and keeps the secret secretly wishing to reveal but she is with tied hands by the chief orders .
Hica this time was torn between saying the truth of what she truly is because the potential dangerous outcome or assepting .
Stoic even trew her toy just because it is a dragon toy . It is needed extriemly strong proof to change his mind and still he might see them more as animals and beasts than inteligent creatures .

Well it is sad loss but what is done is done . I wonder if she'll ever remember her past 4 years stolen from her father thinking that is for the best but what would happen after Hica became a Qeen of the dragon's nest ?

ch 8

And that is how Stoic delited memories making his wanted person that he tinks he like but is now a ghostly blankly person , unwanted and lost until they found again but still forgotten what she was . Will she meet and recall those memories covered in fog .

Was in the original the same when her/his toy was trown ? And Alvin was innocent , he cares and reer for Hic better with that attention .
Too bad that his hearth will harthen and blacken beyond recognising .

ch 6

So mutch power forgotten and forbitten .

ch 5

Will Hicca once again recall those memories ? Even after the war later in her leaving in the island ?

ch 4

Wow so this is Hicup/Hica this time , more bound in care , iteligence , inventiveness , filosophy and magic than brutal streight so wanted here .

ch2 for

ch 1

That doing is horrible .
Really cruel doing sparkling unneeded war all for stupit healing tears , and heathy skin , just because they see dangerour and are just defending themselfs .

The Red Death was the monster of the begining , I don't know what kind of breed was his mother but it does not mater because her child was the ivil truly serpentine poisonous tongue done the greatest evils and poisons the mind first and treathens second , He and dagur the Deranged llok like just like Osfault and Dagur I know .

The nature refused Mildew's existence , that should be a sight to get rid of that Mldew , he would lead to trobles an complaiments .

And also that was the real story of the Boneknapper , the map and the missing toes and Val's coocking . It was needed a brai not a mustle to be solved the riddle .

When I read the scene with the pancakes(?) mentioned, I swear I smelled blueberry pancakes. I'm on a bus - I should be smelling diesel or oil.
~BookLovingPersonR.B.L.

are you going to make one of the second movie and where hiccup has all her powers as a mist runner?

This is great. I just have one question. Is there any way you can have a picture of what hiccup looks like as a Mistrunner? Or a mistrunner in general? I just can't imagine it so well.

I hope you continues with this, and I can't wait to see where it goes!

Hold on I just realized something. If hiccup can understand toothless does that mean her dragon soul is reawakening and of so does cloudjumper sence it like when valka touched the staue? I wonder what HE is going to say when he finds out his sister isn't dead like he and valka thought for 16 years

I wonder what hiccuif she will say when or if she remembers she met toothless before

The last guest review was me; sorry I forgot to login again.

This was a great ending. The next story should be in its own separate title.