Reviews for Intertwined
Merryslaughter chapter 33 . 5h
Omg same as the others, I yelled when I saw the email notification update! Scared my cat.
Thank you sooooo much for adding goodies to chp 3132 too! It hyped up the newest chapter! I love that the chapters are so long too! Your writing is brilliant. All the many characters, Edward's progression of having a relationship, esp with Roy Mustang *squee!* is quite an achievement, the intricacies of alchemy in this world, wow. How do you come up with all those details? Tons of research? Magnificent, can't wait for more!
LuvversLuvvie chapter 33 . 8/9
I squealed a squee of Joy when I saw the e-mail for an update! So I did what I always do and made sure I was in my comfiest chair with lots of time and NO distractions so I can happily read the update! And then I saw your A/N at the top and I did a Li’l happy swiggle and went back to ch 30 to get the relevant context for this chapter! And I was all Ahhhh Yisssss because I love all of it! And then you are correct when you noticed how much we adore this fic so I did what all rational fans do and spent the weekend re-reading this fic! I would have done so anyway because I always do whenever a new chapter comes out, but there was joy of joys when I read the new additions! The first chapter especially flows much better! Lots of love all around! This fic is honestly one of the biggest reasons why I keep my fanfiction account! *chefs kiss* Perfection!
youngar994 chapter 3 . 8/7
can I just say I love your story! especially the little touches like Armstrong's shirt ripping and sparkles lol
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5
I am OVERLY EXCITED FOR ALL OF THIS! After staring MONTHS at my last email, re-reading it a couple more times (from all the other times over) I am so beyond happy and excited to dive in and see the changes. This story has been easily one of my favorites out there hands down. ️️️️️️️
Yumi Edogawa chapter 33 . 8/7
I was so excited to see you updated yesterday! Unfortunately, I didn't have time right then to read the story, especially since I wanted to reread from the beginning again and saw your AN. I still love this story and am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I love Roy and Ed in this story and think you're AU is extremely interesting and unique. I'm also curious to see if Bradley intends to use Edward like Father tried to in canon, or if Ed is right and he intends to use Greed.
Also, I would appreciate it if you would repost the older chapters, perhaps as a new story titled Intertwined Old Version or something, if you can.
SoulMore chapter 33 . 8/6
FAN!~
pbs chapter 33 . 8/5
I just want to say thank you!
You have no idea how happy I was when I saw that there was an update to this story while i was rereading it. I hope you stay safe and as always waiting patiently for the next update.
Sakihinata chapter 33 . 8/5
Amazing chapter full of plot an tension ;)
I love it!
JustSayin'Hi chapter 33 . 8/5
Aaa! I'm so glad you updated! And I LOVE how you gave us more insight into Riza's struggles and insecurities! Havoc is really the kind of guy she needs right now. I'm so happy you're back, keep up the amazing work!
Guest chapter 29 . 5/19
I love this story and i love your writing. But Winry is really starting to piss me off and she honestly makes me not want to read this. Shes so selfish and demanding. And YES i thought the same thing in the anime and manga. Shes just disqusting. So good job on this! Cause my emotions are high right now do to her spending all his money like he owes it to her. He owes her nothing.
Zela Night chapter 32 . 5/13
This is so amazing. The AU starts out a little rough, but the worldbuilding is solid and the character building is stunning. This story is mostly plot and characterization driven and it is masterful at what it aims to accomplish.
I adore this story and am impressed by how well balanced and immersive this is, given that it is confined to words on a screen. This is magnificent.
Merryslaughter chapter 32 . 3/29
This is one of the top FMA fics of all time! Incredible! I re-read it all the time! Please please please write moar!
TheTrueTree chapter 32 . 3/22
I found this wonderful fic in 2016 apparently (time flies) and oh my god it's been four years and it's still one of my honest to god favorite fics of all time, esp. for this fandom. Thank you so much for all of the effort you've put into it and for keeping this going for so long!
kallie.h.hill chapter 32 . 1/27
I read this a couple years ago and I’m so glad I found it again! I love love love the storyline you have going so far and I really hope you continue it! I know it’s been a couple months since you last updated so I hope everything is going well for you. If you do decide to continue this I wish you luck with writing! I love how you portray the characters, I feel like how you write both Roy and Edward are very true to character. A lot of people seem to just glaze over any flaws in the characters but you use those flaws to help the reader better understand the boys and the story line! Thank you for writing this and I hope you have a great day :)
Slip On Ice chapter 32 . 12/10/2019
Squee! I've been coming back about once a month to read this story just because I love it so much and when I saw a new chapter I was so stoked! Love it so much and I love the Havoc/Hawkeye dynamic you've created, I'm almost as invested in that as I am Ed & Roy's.
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